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  • "Reach" BACK TO THE KING KILLA, REP FOR FEED

    Verse 1

    grind on the auto, fantasy shit like Grand Theft Auto
    ya shits not startling, i stock more than FTSE marketing
    i say fuck it to ya bargaining, im dis-content with you
    ill throw my heart on ya face so im literally beating on you
    teaching young crews how to reach for real shit
    but their potential aint big enough like a one time hit
    and their balls aint big enough to get girls to lick
    oh the growth spurts stunted by the way they stunt
    ill throw the acid at the placid, burn through 6 inch glasses
    ill have three men go round ya house and jack off in all your punks asses
    lil bastards, you cant reach coz your arms aint long enough
    aint long enough to even fuck ya'self thats why you hit on pillows and stuff
    ya grill's not tough, i could smack ya teeth and have you spittin out ya kidney
    ya lil dick weed, you got a stiff tongue from eatin dick breed
    take a seat coz killa's back like a recurring heart attack....


    Hook

    reach the limit, life's a ball if you can ball in it
    fame and halls if you can brawl the best from it
    the uk's #1killas here with raw spittin spirit
    drinkin spirits, cocktails and bottled beers all mixed in with it


    Verse 2

    you gonna have to fight me to the death homie, coz simply you cant reach my level
    if you get a sniffle it's coz you got burned worse than lubricant in the foreskin
    whilst watching a porn rental, thistle sting the scratch is severe
    but not as severe as when i reverse ya ear, so you backwardly hear
    yet awkwardly clear ya retard, get ya face covered in blue scars
    ya veins poppin like i sent a pill disguised as a blood vessel down parts
    you a parrot ya lil bitch, retrace all ya spits and see you copy em
    i rock hip hop, get these faggots drunk like a mix of Perno and Christyle
    i hit em sideways, so hard it causes holes in their bi-ways
    i hit bi-ladies, two at a time, fuckin one DIY hoe with a nail gun
    and the other's a dry run, but make em wet at the sight of dick fun
    i already put a tadpole in her belly, so hurry reach for dick son...


    Hook

    reach the limit, life's a ball if you can ball in it
    fame and halls if you can brawl the best from it
    the uk's #1killas here with raw spittin spirit
    drinkin spirits, cocktails and bottled beers all mixed in with it
    SpurattiK

  • #2
    Didn;t read it all sorry...I'm a little tired and I want to go to bed soon, so I ain't so I'm a bit...away...but read the first verse and it was tight man...but still...your multi's

    ill throw my heart on ya face so im literally beating on you

    hahahah

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    • #3
      yea i still gotta get the multies shit mastered, thanks for feed
      SpurattiK

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      • #4
        Yeah, use more multis in your lyrics. Other than that, it seems pretty nice. Keep it up.
        P!

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        • #5
          yea use some multies, but besides that its good
          \

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          • #6
            thanks.. reps for both
            SpurattiK

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            • #7
              You peolle make me laugh who said Need more multies n shit ur all pathetic its like ur bittin of other peoples feedbak fo real.

              You do not need multies to hav a good spit.... i thought it was peetty nice ..nice rhmyes n flowed well
              Walk the path of Jesus, witness if Hell frizzes
              The mind teases reality, crack the pieces
              Nothin' eases, bein' chastise with blood baptize
              Guys revise, acknowledge past lives
              MF Grimm

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              • #8
                Some of it I don't really get. It maybe just a slang thing. But sometime I feel that your rhythm with the words strays you had a couple nice and clever punches I liked these lines the most.


                take a seat coz killa's back like a recurring heart attack.... ( good line I wouldn't use it as a closer line though I'd actually use it as an opener it's got good potential as an opening line I think.


                teaching young crews how to reach for real shit
                but their potential aint big enough like a one time hit ( good stuff, it's sound better in a flow about something more "concious", it's really potent it'd be nice if you name dropped a 1 hit wonder song or artist that rhymed with hit. I can't think of an example but use your imagination.

                I thought the hook was decent it could carry itself in a song. I couldn't find anything that really stuck me in your second verse it was kind of bland in my eye, and I guess it was just egh the best part of that verse was probably.....

                histle sting the scratch is severe
                but not as severe as when i reverse ya ear, so you backwardly hear
                yet awkwardly clear ya retard, get ya face covered in blue scars( i don't really get it but I like the way you were flippin' the mulit's but you use the word severe twice and using the same words twice isn't always bad but you used them to close to one another. Anyway though homie just my 2 cents, some real feedback. Since were all rollin' together we should come up with a song or something or start flippin' some shit in the battle fourms. Get at me.
                7Digit
                UNTOUCHABLE LYRICISTZ

                You The Flyest Guy Walkin' That's Only Because I'm Seated

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                • #9
                  ^ very good feed i liked that rick


                  and essential its always a pleasure.. how ya doin mayne? rep for both
                  SpurattiK

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                  • #10
                    itz pretty gud... buh u noe.. de beginninz kinda weak.... buh itz get betta afta dat..
                    Realizin' priorities and droppin dead weight,
                    the kings cornered, but it ain't a checkmate.

                    -kidNA$TY

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                    • #11
                      ok thanks on feed.. rep
                      SpurattiK

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                      • #12
                        I'm kickin' it man tryin' to get my money situation proper and tryin' ta' make classic lyrics. I'm working on a song right now called "Knock Em' Out" with a sample from Slick Rick's classic joint "Children's Story" I haven't finished it yet I'm almost done with the first verse, and the hook is finished cause it's the sample. I'll post the verse when I'm finished and maybe we could get something rolling. Who knows.

                        Take it easy playa,
                        Rick.
                        7Digit
                        UNTOUCHABLE LYRICISTZ

                        You The Flyest Guy Walkin' That's Only Because I'm Seated

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                        • #13
                          cool, cool man... yo ill ask dusti bout when we gonna drop a song or challenge crews iight...
                          SpurattiK

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                          • #14
                            "but not as severe as when i reverse ya ear, so you backwardly hear" best line of it all.

                            It was okay, far from your best, I've seen better Killa, try hittin some more multies next time yo.

                            I'll leave rep.
                            WwW.ShAdYrEcOrDs.nEt


                            www.hip-hop-underground.com/forum

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                            • #15
                              thank OP.. repped ya
                              SpurattiK

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