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  • Ridiculous_Rick
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    Bumpin' again.

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  • Ridiculous_Rick
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    Bumpin, nah I'm talkin' about Slick Rick's "Children's Story"

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  • metahman
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    sory not fealing it, you really could work on some shit

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  • Ridiculous_Rick
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    I'll try that on my next verse. I'm not sure I grasp the whole concept of multi's when peeps be like feed-my-dog i don't get it explain it to me or somethin'. I though I had a few good punchlines in there nothing to outstanding. But yeah I'll try my best on the next verse to take your advice BeNs. Thanks for the feed fellas.

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  • Ramses`
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    Haha, thats pretty tight.
    Tight -> "Step in the ring, with the king, you'll get rocked,
    Back 2 Woodstock, when the style was striped knee high socks"

    haha. i can relate to you about bein' stuck, n uninspired.

    Anyway, hope to see some new shit soon.

    Ramses`

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  • Be/\/z
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    by punchlines, i meant MORE punchlines.

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  • Be/\/z
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    Its an alright drop, just to mix it up though throw in some punchlines and some sick multi's.


    Talib and Mos' children's story right?

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  • Ridiculous_Rick
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    Feedback please?

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  • Ridiculous_Rick
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    :Yawn: Thanks man I'm glad you like it. Egh, I'm startin' to get bored with rappin and shit I could make these kind of lyrics for days, you know them Fat Joe club joints or whatever ramblin' how tight you are and shit and how you lyrically own. It's becoming a forumla to me and I ain't really feelin' it I'm uninspired right now. Man someone on this board should do a collab with me or something if there goin' through some crazy shit cause my life's bland. Get at me and help me feel the desire and inspiration that I once had.


    Peace,
    Rick
    Last edited by Ridiculous_Rick; 04-01-2005, 12:25 AM.

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  • pandemic
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    This seems good to me. My favorite line was "never see me sweatin' cause ain't nobody cooler". Keep it up.

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  • Ridiculous_Rick
    started a topic "Knock Em Out"- R2

    "Knock Em Out"- R2

    Intro/Chorus:
    Slick Rick's sample from "Children's Story"

    Verse #1:

    Yeah boy with one punch, serve ya anytime breakfast, dinner, or lunch,
    Crazy ta mess with the 7 digit bunch, save the junk,
    Get of my nuts cause I run over chipmunks,
    The new ruler, educatin' you grade-schoolers,
    Never see me sweatin' cause ain't nobody cooler,
    Ballin' every season my pockets are for-evergreen,
    Mess with my clique and we'll have your white tee lookin' like saltines,
    Step in the ring, with the king, you'll get rocked,
    Back 2 Woodstock, when the style was striped knee high socks,
    Feelin' lucky born on the day of the shamrocks,
    Ain't nothin' charged yet I got the whole culture shocked,
    Rip tracks up leave crews slaughtered like livestock,
    Leave the competion behind me like backstops,
    I've got the juice, so neat ,so spruce,
    Best recluse, or recieve further abuse,
    Bring fire every time I step in the booth.

    Hook:

    Slick Rick's sample from "Children's Story".


    Ending CommentsL
    That's all I got so far tell me what you think.
    Last edited by Ridiculous_Rick; 04-01-2005, 02:14 AM.

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