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    livin in fear of terrorist attacks since 9-11,
    so many innocent victims sent to heaven,
    and it wasnt there time or fault,its sickening,
    this is a sign to stop the way were livin,
    cause everyones become materailised,
    so we need to capetailise on are chances,
    and relise our mistakes before were held to more ransoms,
    and little kids nowadays,dancin wit the devil,
    drug dealers outta business tryna sell still,
    dont they care wat we feel,we gotta break this habit,
    envision a place of peace and grab it,
    caus ive had it,to much pain,constantly bombarded,
    threw away and discarded,forgotten about and disregarded,
    over time my shells hardened,,
    but how did this shit happin,was i targeted,
    caus of my beliefs and religion,
    why,i aint afraid to admit im a christian,
    listin i dont give a fuk,deaths the only thing givin,

    ON THESE TRACKS I EXPSOE MY LIFE,
    TRIED TO HOLD ME DWN BUT ITS IN MY BLOOD TO FIGHT,
    I'LL NEVER GIVE UP OR LOSE SIGHT,
    SO IM HERE TO STAY AND DOWN TO RIDE ANY NIGHT,



    YO WAT YALL FINK N ANY IDEAS ON A TITLE N PLZ RATE 1-10
    You ain't got a truck that's hooked up with rims
    Kids'll see you like "damn, why I looked up to him?

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    caus ive had it,to much pain,constantly bombarded,
    threw away and discarded,forgotten about and disregarded,
    Best bar RIght there ^

    not bad man, i dont really no what to say on it, work on ya RHymez, flow, and add multiez, and make ya linez a little longer, a word or two, and try and avoid so many pausez (commaz) in a sentence, it slowz the flow

    rookie scale - 6/10
    I got the DVD of your wife gettin killed and raped,
    and everybody peeped it like the Sharon Hilton tape.



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    http://theurbanblock.com/forum/



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    • #3
      It was aight i'm gonna say 6 maybe a 7 cuz Im a rookie myself. bUt keep it up

      peace
      Roxanne

      *The FreeStyLe Church*

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