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    the pain is sinking into me and i dont know why
    but i cant let it get to me gotta let it die
    'cause the pain has caused so much hurt for me
    its been taking over me and i can hardly breathe
    the lies that were told keep replaying in my head
    ill never forget those hurtful words that were said
    these tears are still rolling down my face
    from Day 1 those horrifying moments still wont erase


    thats a lil bit...im still workin' on it so yea lemme know wat u think...
    R.I.P. DESHAUN "PROOF" HOLTON
    (F)10/2/75-4/11/06(F)
    "THEY SAY THE GOOD DIE YOUNG...." WE'LL MISS YOU

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    u need elevtion u got basic rhymes, it seems more of a poem then a rap so....lol keep it up any how
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    • #3
      thnx...i meant for it to be a poem btw but thnx
      R.I.P. DESHAUN "PROOF" HOLTON
      (F)10/2/75-4/11/06(F)
      "THEY SAY THE GOOD DIE YOUNG...." WE'LL MISS YOU

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      • #4
        yea keep elevatin ur getting somewhere

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        • #5
          thnx very much..
          R.I.P. DESHAUN "PROOF" HOLTON
          (F)10/2/75-4/11/06(F)
          "THEY SAY THE GOOD DIE YOUNG...." WE'LL MISS YOU

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          • #6
            Originally posted by AK-47Slim
            yea keep elevatin ur getting somewhere

            lmfao
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            www.youtube.com/rekhedne6

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            • #7
              Lol... A snippet from text. Haha...
              To the British, I'm Ghandi/
              To the Japanese I'm an American pilot flyin over Nagasaki/
              To the AIDS patient I'm your last antibody/
              Sittin and waitin for a cure from modern biology/


              -Canibus

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              • #8
                This is your last warning. Next time......
                I'm pre-disastrous, I fuck shit up before it happens
                Like blown engines of Airplanes with snorin' captains

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