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  • My Freestyle for tonight

    so here's my freestyle for tonight
    god knows i better keep it concise and tight
    so if anyone wants a piece come and pick a fight
    I am everything but hype- so come on down bitches
    yall remind me about prison house snitches
    always working with the guards flippin switches
    and blades in trade for freedom and privileges
    yeah too bad i dont know too much about that business
    i've only been locked up one night
    for know reason- it was like open season
    for the police that night
    it was like they were up for pickin fights
    so dont you fright
    i will always stand up for what is right
    and i will always know my own rites
    in the religious sense- cuz me and god our F'n tight
    so give me a damn light
    so i can spark up this cig
    it helps me to calm my nerves
    i am not that easy to break, i ain't no twig
    so someone stand up so i actually have some one to serve
    well times up, so someone tell me how much respect i deserve
    MC ERASE ------------------------------------- MC ERASE
    www.myspace.com/mcerase
    MC ERASE ------------------------------------- MC ERASE

  • #2
    the names suups im sick enuf to kill u with paper cups u say if anyone wants a piece to come pick a fight well im a man made out of bricks i could fight all night i would cut u from top to toe i no i got yall fellin ma flow this is the realest shit because bit by bit im tearin you apart when im done your gona look like a squishe from the simpsons quick e-mart just like bart il make you eat my shorts take me on the basketball court if you wanna see my real skills or take me to your local club and il teach you how to pop pills im a women thriller,cop killer,your an ass crack filler for your boy friends in the jail i dont need to come to your house to kill you il just send a bomb in the mail, il give you a light to spark up your cig if you give me a borrow of a doller so i can hav a night with your mother the only thing youll be serving is cups of coffee you beef with me il stick to you like toffee i wont let go till you lay low and back away and you were right how can you be a twig when your a pussy in the dictionary that means your a cat so you have nine lifes i just took one life away from you so back away before i take another 8 of and your whole crew from my point of view you dont deserve any respect il break your neck leave you lyin like a car wreck if you allways stand up for what is right then you wouldnt have botherd rappin last night cos your rhymes are whack so go back to your basket little pussy cat ive had enough of this il leave it at that and see what you have big enough balls for a comeback
    UNDERDOGG ARMY

    suups-----nooby_shady----hydro 101

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    • #3
      tight fight and night were rhymed together like 3 timez, in less than those 10 odd barz, or so... Wrong!

      and suupz, til u learn that 1) this is a freestyle forum, u dont come in here abd try to make a battle outta it, and 2) write ya rhymez like everyone esle doez, then ill be more than glad to read em and give feedback.
      I got the DVD of your wife gettin killed and raped,
      and everybody peeped it like the Sharon Hilton tape.



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      • #4
        interestin view snyper 0512 but you dont no what ive been thro so dont come along tellin me how to write my rhymes tight fight and night were rhymed 2getha 3 times?? im begginin to think your blind cos did i say anywher in that rhyme that i wanted your feedback you betta go home and smoke some weed or some crack before you come bringing me that sayin shit like write rhymes like everyone else does, well cuz why should i rite like the rest when i could be unique and have my own style and become the best you better buy yourself a vest and a bullet proof shield to hide your head and neck and whats wrong with turning this into a battle mc erase asked some one to step up maybe its cos your scared il tear your shit up i hope you got a four leaf clover cos your gona need luck if you beef wi me i dont give a fuk what you think of my rhymes im the realest mc around you should bow down and hand me any power you have on the underground oh look i just found a brick to help me re arrange your face and if this is for freestyles why didnt you write your own stuff il tell you why cos you aint no rapper you aint even a man your a bitch your the snitch mcerase was talkin about you wanna do this face to face give me a shout ... holla dog and remember this i do what the fuk i want and if you dont like it tuff shit i mean cmon what the fuk you gona do
        UNDERDOGG ARMY

        suups-----nooby_shady----hydro 101

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        • #5
          Thanks for the tip man... I will try harder next time to start to rhyme a little better off the top of my head.
          MC ERASE ------------------------------------- MC ERASE
          www.myspace.com/mcerase
          MC ERASE ------------------------------------- MC ERASE

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