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  • REVOLVING DOORS. ( a short ryme.)

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    ((( DEDICATED TO THE CRIMINAL JUSTICE SYSTEM.)))
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    In & out back & forth, same fucked up shit different fucked up day.... a crimes been comitted, oh gruesomes the one to blame, (fuck that I was framed.)./// They dont listen though, that bitch d.a. wants my ass locked up anyway.... 18 months for sumthin I didnt do thats fuckin insaine, just another number a.k.a slave./// So what I have a criminal record, so what I did 6 1\2 years.... so what I dont show empathy by pleadin for mercy & sheddin remorseful tears./// Do what you muthafuckaz will, go ahead and encage me, go ahead and enrage me.... go ahead and try to stop me from passin my seed on through a baby./// You muthafuckaz cant incarserate me forever, my soul roams free.... my mind is in my hood when my body is in the penatentary./// Just imagine the drama when I produce a child, it will be more sadistic then I could ever be.... just remember the old sayin ( the apple dont fall to far from the tree.)./// Put me in those fuckin chains, you cant break my spirit, gruesome will always remain.... fuck a lawyer on retain, Ill spit at the jury & continue to be profaine./// Better give me the gas now cuz when I go out it aint gonna be half assed.... fuck a mission impossible, I deliver my task fast & make it a memory of the past./// Growin up in group homes , treatment centers & jail now look what it unvailed.... the system wanted a monstrosity scape goat, ha ha well it didnt fail./// Point that finger, just dont be suprised when I break the muthafucka off.... look at how I grew up, do you expect me to be soft? ha ha I think not./// I went to jail at 10 years old, that shit aint right, its fuckin cruel.... and they wonder at 22 why I gun deul & leave succaz in blood pools./// Well you muthafuckaz sculpted me, you just forgot a concious.... a short fused temper, with a rage uncontrollable and monsterous./// So point that finger back in your own direction.... cuz in the system theres no such thing as correction.
    Battle Record 25 - 6.
    Official Winner of FT1.
    http://www.dferecordz.com/gru.jpg
    A coward dies a thousand deaths,
    a soldier only dies but one.

  • #2
    Damn son that rhyme was tight to bad people dont reply on shit on here. And just a note anybody hating on Gruesome will catch a

    L piece by me so bring the pain/ and catch a left hook to the brain/till u pass out and forget ur name/yall cant battle on here how u gonna have some fame/U cant handle a match how u gonna fuck wit Flame/

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    • #3
      thanx dawg. I appreciate the positive feedback yo.
      Battle Record 25 - 6.
      Official Winner of FT1.
      http://www.dferecordz.com/gru.jpg
      A coward dies a thousand deaths,
      a soldier only dies but one.

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      • #4
        that shit was hot, way better then mine, its true tho, not alot fo people give feedback unfortunetly

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        • #5
          Hot Shit

          Yo that was real tight GRUESOME. Reppin SICK SIDE to the fullest. Fuck the fuckin 5-0, fuck the feds, fuck the judges. Fuck em all. Pece dawg.
          Peace 5 and 92, you're missed.

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          • #6
            yo, nice rhyming! i like the way u can keep a topic, and your vocabulary range is pretty damn special too. Keep up the work!

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