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  • Introducing......Wrath

    This is my portion for a 7 Deadly Sins Collab with tha Lyrical Dynasty camp.Im tha Sin of Wrath....Opinions and thoughts would be appreciated.


    Wrath(HungJury)
    It iz me tha Eternal seed on which ya Ego Feedz Im tha Frustrations in your Head when ya in Utter DisBelief.Im tha Curses that you emit in ya Speach for those that made you feel Cheap,Im tha Wolf inside us all Stalkin unexpected Sheep.Im that Moment when a Honest Man becomes a Kreep and shatters ya sheltered Mystique!Im tha fit you threw as a child for that Toy so ya folks would BuyIt,Im tha DisIllussioned CrackHead breakin out Coke Lines for you TryIt,Im tha Expressions on tha Face of Thousands in a Street Riot.That sinster Voice in tha Back of ya Head that jus wont be Quiet.Im tha Yuppie with 17 years in a Cubicle who Didnt get his Raise,Im tha Assault Rifle he Brought With him to Work tha next Day.Im tha One tellin ya to break all tha Rules youve always Obeyed,Im tha Dj you stoodup that makes sure your Lp never catches AirPlay.Im tha Disgruntled TeenAger for Show n Tell Bringin an AK.Im tha Heat tha Fuels our Souls Lighters im tha Backlash Towards Mc Biterz.Im tha Racial Divider tha Foil to tha Common Outsider,im tha Tru Feelingz for TimMcVeigh by tha Oklahome Bombing Survivors.Through everyone of are Headz my Thoughts have Passed,Im tha Motivation when Abused Children blast they Paps and have tha Last Laugh.Im what tha hurt breeds when Flagz are Hung at half Mass,Im that Moment of Shame you jus cant let slip into tha Past.Im Tha One and Only Wrath and As long as Hate Exsists I shall Forever Last
    HungJury aka Tha NocTurnal NightMare

    Disgruntled RapBoard Veteran

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    Hungjury-That was wicked! It flowed really well.
    -Jodi
    U make me cum-
    U make me cumplete-
    U make me cumpletely miserable.
    ************************************************** **********
    When The Pawn Hits The Conflicts He Thinks Like A King
    What He Knows Throws The Blows When He Goes To The Fight
    And He’ll Win The Whole Thing ‘Fore He Enters The Ring
    There’s No Body To Batter When Your Mind Is Your Might
    So When You Go Solo, You Hold Your Own Hand
    And Remember That Depth Is The Greatest Of Heights
    And If You Know Where You Stand, Then You Know Where To Land
    And If You Fall It Won’t Matter, Cuz You’ll Know That You’re Right********************************************* **********
    It took an Hour-Maybe a day- But thats happens when your circumstance is movie size.**************************************

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    • #3
      Word,

      Thanks for tha luv Jodi.I think this piece turned out really good as well.Youve at least allowed me tha opinion to believe maybe someone can look at something objectively on this board.Props on that one.


      Uppin to see if anyone else rates stuff around here
      HungJury aka Tha NocTurnal NightMare

      Disgruntled RapBoard Veteran

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      • #4
        Yo no beef at all 1st off. To tell you the truth i wasnt feelin you too much on the 1st couple of things you posted,just my opinion, but yo this joint is ill! No doubt son keep that shit up yo. The flow was dope and the way you rapped as "wrath" was phat.

        holla
        d.r.kaos

        the CURSE

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        • #5
          yeah dude this shit was pretty original idea, like it.
          and your shit before, i love your rhymin scheme, tis hot.
          anyway i'd like to see another verse by 'wrath' :D
          http://dalux.dmusic.com

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          • #6
            Thanx for tha Rates yall,But this is jus my portion of a collab on tha 7 deadly sins so ill doubt ill this would be a reoccuring character.So to hear yall was Feeling my other drops that much but majority of my grade A material goes to my homeboard and other(no offense) boards that actually seem to rate stuff more than yall do.But anyways if theres enuff intrest ill Drop that entire deadly sins collab for yall to peep when tha others finish they verse.
            HungJury aka Tha NocTurnal NightMare

            Disgruntled RapBoard Veteran

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            • #7
              sup!

              Fuck, Ive missed the whole judgement thing day coz of my shit comp, anyway, I liked your rhymes hung, completely different style to what people usually use...I liked these lines;

              "Im tha Expressions on tha Face of Thousands in a Street Riot.That sinster Voice in tha Back of ya Head that jus wont be Quiet"

              tight! keep postin that kinda shit

              LaTeRz

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              • #8
                im just uppin this for ya luv
                will you cut me now since i did you a favor? :D
                im purely divine

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                • #9
                  yeah,this is ill,good inteligent rhyming,good flow and a good vocab used,nice one!

                  Post the entire collab,it sounds ill.
                  Id like to see how someone can flow as the sin of Gluttony..

                  peace...Dark....

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                  • #10
                    THAT WAS ILL

                    shit dawg,
                    that was muthafuckiin ill.
                    SAIGON - The Greatest Story Never Told : Coming Soon

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                    • #11
                      Uppin
                      HungJury aka Tha NocTurnal NightMare

                      Disgruntled RapBoard Veteran

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                      • #12
                        uppin for tha hell of it
                        HungJury aka Tha NocTurnal NightMare

                        Disgruntled RapBoard Veteran

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