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  • DaLux this is for u G.............

    DaLux here be dat rhyme u be wantin!!

    My rhymes will hit u like a "BRACKLESS DUMPTRUCK" \\
    They will knock u out and leave u FATALY CONCUSED \\
    They be so sharp they can cut holes IN GLASS \\
    They will slice up yo boat and u be SINKIN FAST \\
    Now yo ass be down like a SUNKEN SHIP \\
    And i be laughtin at u like a DRUNKIN HICK \\
    I be a crim dat rasies ALL SUSPECION \\
    To get rid of me ya'll have to CALL a PERTITION \\
    But if u do this ill slit u open cos dat be my SOUL MISSION \\
    My rhymes r so jaged they will cut u open when U SWALLOW \\
    And then yo whole family will be mornin IN SORROW \\
    Cos yo will BE DEAD \\
    And ya'll be just in our minds like DROP DEAD FRED \\
    Then ill dig up yo carkass and stand u UP TALL \\
    Then ill drop down ya pants and cut off YO BALLS \\
    And send them to yo gran packed up AND ALL \\
    But dat dick of urs be a tool dat never FIXED SHIT \\
    Cos all u did is tossed it and never STICKED IT \\
    Yo had ur last words but i still BE ROLLIN \\
    Cos this hit rite here will be MY OMEN \\
    But dat is all over now and its a NEW YEAR \\
    And all ready we've seen a FEW more TEARS \\
    For i took out yo mum in FASIONABLE STYLE \\
    I cewed her up and shat her out in a UNTOUCHABLE BILE \\
    It burnt through tha floor like a SULFURIC ACID \\
    And toasted a poor and deffenceless HEART SICK BASSET \\
    Enought bout yo mum and yo DUG UP GRAVE \\
    And back to my ill rhymin "now SHUT UP and BEHAVE" \\
    Now listen boys and girls do u wanna be LIKE ME?? \\
    Ill now tell u all how to be an ILL EMCEE \\
    Listen up now boys this here is FOR U \\
    Tha more records u sell tha more money u SCORE, TRUE?? \\
    But in this game its not all but tha rhymes u BE PRODUCEN \\
    But it also be bout ur CONTIBUTION \\
    So if u help to cause SOMTHIN BIG \\
    Yo might just aswell get a CONCERTE GIG \\
    Remember dat boys dat statement BE TRUE \\
    Now for u girls this one is FOR U \\
    U's aint goin no where yo ass should be IN THA KITCHEN \\
    Cookin yo husband up a mighty tasty FINGER LICKEN CHICKEN \\
    Now if i see yo butt move from DAT SPOT \\
    U betta fuckin hide cos my GAT be HOT \\
    Ill hunt u down and smoke U FOOLs \\
    So girls dat be my ONLY RULE for U \\
    I hope u learnt somthin new HERE TODAY \\
    And there is just one more thing id like to make CLEAR and SAY \\
    "Dont do drugs" they be bad for YO HEALTH \\
    "Dat shit be wack" and can cause u to kill YO SELF \\

    PEACE

    Hola back and tell me what yo think!!
    .: Ruban Bates :.
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    (BattlE RecorD - 25/12)
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  • #2
    yeah, man
    thats better shit, i like the rhymin better than before,
    pretty good vocabulary, better rhymin definately, few clever lines, but you need a few more. content is kinda all over the place, but definately improving man.
    http://dalux.dmusic.com

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    • #3
      Thanks DOGG

      Yo FOR RULE!!

      Yeah it kinda is all over tha joint hey!!

      But yeah PRACTICE MAKES PERFECT!!

      Well i think i IMPROVED a whole heap in just a day or 2!!

      So DaLux u in a CREW??

      Hola BACK..........

      PEACE
      .: Ruban Bates :.
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      (BattlE RecorD - 25/12)
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      • #4
        sure am.
        im in a crew with my friend and my cousin.
        and its not really on here but could be soon.
        http://dalux.dmusic.com

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        • #5
          SWEET.........

          So what ya'll called???

          Im kinda in a CREW!!
          We just started up!! we be called tha ROAD DoGGz!!
          And we might have a CD soon!!
          U know just fuckin round!!

          DO u have a CD???

          PEACE........
          .: Ruban Bates :.
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          (BattlE RecorD - 25/12)
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          • #6
            not yet man, im gnna be on Xplicit's EP prolly, im supposed to be recording some shit this week for him.
            but if i can get more people to sign up for the Audio Battle Board (in battle board, sign up now everyone!) then i'd be recording a lot more shit for battles n stuff.
            my crew are called : Addix , whcih i thought was qite good for what we do most the time :D
            http://dalux.dmusic.com

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            • #7
              LOL Ok DOGG dat shit be SWEET!!

              Hey dogg i was gonna rap this thread to tha music of:

              DMX : What's My Name......

              And if i think it sounds any good at all ill send it over to ya!!
              And yo can tell me what yo think!!

              I cant RAP dat well either cos im just startin out!! But hey ill improve.......

              PEACE.....
              .: Ruban Bates :.
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              (BattlE RecorD - 25/12)
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              • #8
                yo, that would be cool, practice rapping along with shit with your own lyrics before recording so you can get your flow and style jsut right. then you should record a really good verse you have written and it'd be cool
                http://dalux.dmusic.com

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                • #9
                  Yo Dogg.......

                  Hey DaLux im OUT its late out here im tired and im goin catch a like SHUT EYE!! and i wont be back up in here for a few more days!! ( i wrote ya a pm explainin y and shit )

                  WELL IM OUT

                  CATCH YO ON THA DARK SIDE G

                  PEACE........
                  .: Ruban Bates :.
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                  (BattlE RecorD - 25/12)
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                  • #10
                    RATE THIS.........

                    Rate this rhyme!!!

                    be brutally truthful!!!!

                    i can take it!!
                    .: Ruban Bates :.
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                    (BattlE RecorD - 25/12)
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                    • #11
                      Come on people.....

                      Come on someone rate it!!!!!!

                      SHIT........................................

                      Just say sumthin!!!!
                      .: Ruban Bates :.
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                      (BattlE RecorD - 25/12)
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                      • #12
                        yo tight ass shit X keep up the rhyming son u got talent yo PEEP OUT THIS BATTLE FOR THE FINAL TOURNI,,ITS IN THE BATTLE BOARD AT THE VERY TOP ITS STICKY PEEP IT AND VOTE PEACE

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                        • #13
                          Thanks G........

                          Originally posted by emyhr
                          yo tight ass shit X keep up the rhyming son u got talent yo PEEP OUT THIS BATTLE FOR THE FINAL TOURNI,,ITS IN THE BATTLE BOARD AT THE VERY TOP ITS STICKY PEEP IT AND VOTE PEACE
                          Thanks G dat shit is tight!!

                          For a LYRICAL MASTER like u to say dat shit bout my rhmye makes this shit much easyer to do!!

                          once again thanks for tha post!!

                          *PEOPLE RATE IT*

                          i wanna know what yas all think!!
                          .: Ruban Bates :.
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                          (BattlE RecorD - 25/12)
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                          • #14
                            SHIT

                            FUCKIN HELL..........

                            over 100 views and only 2 people told me what they thought bout my rhyme!!

                            SHIT DAT IS WACK............

                            PEACE
                            .: Ruban Bates :.
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                            (BattlE RecorD - 25/12)
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                            • #15
                              SHIT

                              Originally posted by X-TACY
                              FUCKIN HELL..........

                              over 100 views and only 2 people told me what they thought bout my rhyme!!

                              SHIT DAT IS WACK............

                              PEACE
                              Im quotin myself to get yo fucks out there who be viewin my shit and aint postin nufin!! yo all wack!!

                              i need opinions!!

                              POST DAT SHIT UP!!

                              PEACE
                              .: Ruban Bates :.
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                              (BattlE RecorD - 25/12)
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