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    i got my middle finger flipped in the air like i just dont care/ peeps stop and stiar and give me an evil glare/when u read my shit it turns your hair grey what can i say/ i just lay down my beats hopen that i got peeps on the edge of there seat/ waiten for me to produce more and rudce more/ mcee's who pays fee's for peeps to write there shit if u play the game like dat your gunna get hit/ and split in in 3 dont try to ryhme like me get your own styke G/ peeps wanna hear shit thats new so stay true/ to your self and u will find your self in lots of wealth/dont try to b fake thats a mistake many rapper make/ take my advise rip ^ the rap scene trun other mcee's faces green/ from geliousy cuz the gettn mad cuz they been had/ its sorta sad how bad the can rap it sounds like crap/ i u rap u rap for a reason its lyrical treason/ if u steal shit from eminem and dre dont u got your own shit to say/
    if i kill u will u scream???

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    some1 read dis
    if i kill u will u scream???

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      hrm.. not sure what i make of this, rhymin is quite basic dude i thought you could do better, and the content is quite 'all over the place'
      i reckon you gotta think of new things to rhyme, coz basically every rhyme you did there is in most raps, when you think about it more your a lot better, anyway keep it up
      http://dalux.dmusic.com

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