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    sup people, I posted this in another thread but its kinda hidden away, any kinda feedbak would b appreciated...

    So Solid Player's the MC winnin the Acolades/
    Like an instant cook 'cake' I got this rap shit 'pre-made'/
    My lyrics are heavy 'impactin' knockin you back a full 'decade'/
    When im on stage im embarrassing respected mc's, puttin them outta their job, another MC on minimum wage/
    My presence is felt like Makaveli, coz 'until the end of time' I aint gone fade/
    I'm Like a lyrical bandit on the run, fuck the po-lice barricadin'/
    Like a True player Im 'pimpin' wack mc's who need 'degradin'/
    I'm the MC bouncin back makin himself noticebale that even Stevie Wonder quits pretendin hes blind/
    Coz like Obie Trice, I'm the next 'well known asshole' to get signed/
    Wack MC's take the reserved seats/
    Coz on stage im 'blowin up' makin Saddam cancel his biological weaponry as a form of retreat/
    Solid Player's the alias thats famous for its originality/
    all yo 'dogg' names are played out, like ludacris's southern hospitality/
    Player's styles carries a health hazard, bite my style and make yo vocal cords go septic/
    Move over yall, Im makin people with alzheimers remember my lyricz and respect it//

    PeAcE

  • #2
    that shits nice, you went with the flow and used big words which i cant do lol
    keep it up
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    • #3
      so solid bro, you tryin to cram way to many words into your verses, losin the flow

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      • #4
        Lyrically that was dope, but i agree wit dan-g , you usin too many words in each bar and you losin tha flow.
        anyways it was tight.
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        • #5
          Appreciated

          Sup people, appreciate the feedbak, yeah I see what u mean, but when I was runnin it thru my head it sounded aight but yea like u's said, kinda loses its flow...I'll work on that

          Respek ppl

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