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    i take the main stage flip to the main page/ release all my rage on this mic its a trick/ i have learned if u dont wanna get burned in this game make sure your shit aint lame/follow this and u will b in the rap hall of fame/but u wanna take the easy route so u try to bout/ the main man right off hand well let me land / a few of my major ryhmes and let commit a few of my lyrical crimes/ its times like these that will make u beg please get on your knees/ and begen t retreat u have sufferd a defeat/watch out damn u got shot know u rapped in linen sheets/know u 6 feet under in a casket u asked for it/ know u bit the dust i told u u cant trust/ anyone when your ryhmes turn to rust and u cant bust/ a beat i had to release my cold heat shoot u dead keep u in your seet/ its not that i dont like u its that i hate and can tolerate/ u and your supposed rap crew/so i suggest u la low so i dont blow/u away u cant stay i this biz for long your raps r turnin to songs/u made all the right moves wrong/ i say hang up your mike and retire cuz if u dont u gunna get fired/
    if i kill u will u scream???

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    Re: please read this and critque

    Originally posted by soulassasin
    i take the main stage flip to the main page/ release all my rage on this mic its a trick/ i have learned if u dont wanna get burned in this game make sure your shit aint lame/follow this and u will b in the rap hall of fame/but u wanna take the easy route so u try to bout/ the main man right off hand well let me land / a few of my major ryhmes and let commit a few of my lyrical crimes/ its times like these that will make u beg please get on your knees/ and begen t retreat u have sufferd a defeat/watch out damn u got shot know u rapped in linen sheets/know u 6 feet under in a casket u asked for it/ know u bit the dust i told u u cant trust/ anyone when your ryhmes turn to rust and u cant bust/ a beat i had to release my cold heat shoot u dead keep u in your seet/ its not that i dont like u its that i hate and can tolerate/ u and your supposed rap crew/so i suggest u la low so i dont blow/u away u cant stay i this biz for long your raps r turnin to songs/u made all the right moves wrong/ i say hang up your mike and retire cuz if u dont u gunna get fired/
    Haha that is the shit!

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      thanks
      if i kill u will u scream???

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