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    vision all hazy mind wanders im going crazy/
    locked up for my own safety/
    sick of haters and they all trying to play me/
    im seeing pistols and they all tryin to blaze me/
    go on and hate me but before you do/
    do you wanna fuck with some1 who has nothing to lose?/
    you wanna fuck wit some1 who has nothing to prove/
    a suicidal man holdin 2 twenty twos?/
    1 for me 1 for you russian roulette to the death/
    both fully loaded put the fukin piece to ya head/
    i just wanna blow ya mind like eve literally/
    till im covered in so much blood that i cant see/
    and cant breath i feel the walls closin in /
    paranoia sets in, mind spins ,soul longs to sin/
    how do i begin to silence evil thoughts that aint there/
    when im told that its nothing and i shouldnt be scared/
    when my thoughts are so evil that my visions impared/
    told to repent for my action and my spirit will be spared/
    like anybody cared when the saw this grown man cry/
    and each day another piece of me dies/
    why..do i lose grip and continue to slip/
    so far down inside this ditch i continue to dig/
    its sick maybe 1 day i will be ok/
    until then ima continiue to play with this ak/
    fell my rage look in my eyes see the pain i hold/
    and expose the whole reason that my soul is cold/

    just a little something its probably hard to see how it flows thats why i hpe we get this audio board so i can start recordin these but please hit me back with some thoughts...

    holla
    d.r.kaos

    the CURSE

  • #2
    that was a tight cut, nice shit

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    • #3
      good lookin....its not my best shit i just needed to get shit out ya know....

      holla
      d.r.kaos

      the CURSE

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      • #4
        uppin

        Please leave some feedback

        holla
        d.r.kaos

        the CURSE

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        • #5
          good getting some shit off your chest.
          The second half of the rhyme was deep.

          Hey DRK, are you in the ever gonna drop your verse for the AUDIO tourney??!! or did you just quit?
          this joke : how many hiphoppers does it take to screw in a lightbulb? .................. three, one to screw in the new lightbulb, and two to argue over how much better the old one was.

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          • #6
            Yo thanks Prime and about the tourney sorry its just hard for me to find time to get on my comp and record. Im gonna try and do that shit tonight give me like 2 more days if ya want and if i cant do it then ill let ya know so you can move on.

            Holla
            d.r.kaos

            the CURSE

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            • #7
              dont worry, their aint no time limit no more, just get it done if you can,

              emhyr and me both got verses

              pzzz
              this joke : how many hiphoppers does it take to screw in a lightbulb? .................. three, one to screw in the new lightbulb, and two to argue over how much better the old one was.

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              • #8
                alright no problem. Now are we makin these joints directly at our opposition or just any battle ryhmes will do??
                d.r.kaos

                the CURSE

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                • #9
                  any way that you like it,
                  its the first audio tourney, so do it the way you find easiest,
                  this joke : how many hiphoppers does it take to screw in a lightbulb? .................. three, one to screw in the new lightbulb, and two to argue over how much better the old one was.

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                  • #10
                    alright cuz i got a battle rap written it just isnt directed to any1 in particular. It aint that good but ill just record that 1 to save time ya know?

                    holla
                    d.r.kaos

                    the CURSE

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                    • #11
                      ayo d.r.k

                      that shit was hott. keep thatr up and i wanna read more of that shit

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                      • #12
                        thanks dogg i got 2 other threads up in here peep them and let me know what ya think dogg

                        holla
                        d.r.kaos

                        the CURSE

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                        • #13
                          Feeling

                          Yo, real hott shit man. Fucking dark flow, nice wordplay n everything. keep it up playa.

                          PEACE
                          The only thing worse than the wretched pain in my mouth is the excrement spewing from yours-Stewie Griffen

                          ONLY GOD CAN JUDGE ME

                          R.I.P ~ Tupac Shakur-my biggest musical inspiration…you are missed everyday

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                          • #14
                            TIGHT..............

                            Yo D.R.K u rhymes r TIGHT!!

                            I was feelin this one!! It was HOT!!

                            keep postin!!!

                            PEACE.....
                            .: Ruban Bates :.
                            --------------------------------------
                            (BattlE RecorD - 25/12)
                            --------------------------------------

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                            • #15
                              Well damn. One of the first things i've seen on here that has really impressed me. Want to work with me on something? If you'll read my Insane song (search for it), and the freestyle under "great freestyle - check it out", I think you might be impressed. I think our styles would complent each other well. Im not sure about it but would ya mind givin me your AOL screename just in case (if u have one)?

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