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  • LyriKal Demonz *HoT*

    When I rap people accuse me for cheating and double teaming/
    Because when I flow I spit out cold blooded demons/
    They enter your body through your forehead/
    And when there in they release bombs consisting sizzling flames/
    That go in your brain and roast your membrane/
    After that occurs they move down to your eyes/
    They push em back so you can watch as your insides fry/
    They move to your mouth and eat up your tongue/
    Take out your teeth so when you spit you only slamming your gums/
    on the way out they shit poisonous dung on your lungs/
    Then they go down to your heart and play wit your heartbeat./
    They make it stop then fast so you cry till your eyes bleed/
    They go to your ribs and absorb them so your bodys force to leak/
    Then they move on down and pound on your knees making a hip hop beat/
    While you cant even scream your laying down infront of the true emcee/
    Let me rephrase that “laying doing infront of the true lyrical king”/
    First rapping was my ambition for me so I can get richs/
    I flowed so much it turned into a lyrical addiction/

  • #2
    hey that was good, the flow was good too and it was a good concept, overall i'd give it and 8.5/10
    OH HAI!

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    • #3
      Tight shit man keep em suggestions comin on my posts your shit aint whack as I thought
      mean concept to spit about overall keep your west coast rhymes comin man

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      • #4
        Thanks Fo The feedback..keep um comin
        First rapping was my ambition for me so I can get richs/
        I flowed so much it turned into a lyrical addiction/

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        • #5
          Not bad. Flow was on point but you need to add some multis and wordplay for a more interesting verse. Just my opinion.

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