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    everey day im feelin more broke just hit the bottom
    realize that if i got chances i must grab em
    write lyrics to express myself is only think i got
    i dont really care if u feelin me or not
    got no help from nowhere only askin god
    but in the next moment gotta go to sell crack
    what i need is smoke weed but can i get up on my feet
    only mysery problems with police really near to tragedy
    my hommie's chest bleed but gotta stay strong 1 2 breathe
    im just a hustler i aint a fuckin G
    and never act someone who i'll never be
    fuck scruples i wanna get out of the dirt been glory
    u think its over but this aint the end of the story
    a lot of peple dont like me but they wont fight me
    rap is think i cant live widout its just inside me
    dream for mills but got no even enough to bye a nikes
    u can be embaressed only if u listen closely
    somethink wich i know isnt very nicely
    evryone wanna have a peace of cacke
    no meatter what does it take
    but some just cant so they haters they hate
    others make statements they real but they r fake
    but i respect em cuz i aint no motherfuckin hater
    im just a mothefuckin money motivator and also rhyme creator
    u tryin to move me and im tryin to move u
    magic circle of the life till somebody lose u
    this is only line i need to smash u
    but i gotta hurry cuz someone else can crash u
    when im not on ur side i just tell u in ur eyes
    they hit me so much times exactly by that kinda lies
    think u got hommie for life but found out its fake
    he get some money byin covertable or impala
    forget his home boys and never come to halla

  • #2
    Pretty basic rhymes but your flow was nice. Try workin on multis and wordplay.

    Peace
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    They call me Sinful for a reason.....
    Think about it.....

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    • #3
      Originally posted by MC SinFul
      Pretty basic rhymes but your flow was nice. Try workin on multis and wordplay.

      Peace

      yea what he said^^^^^^^. challenge yourself, not saying that this wasnt good but it could have been better, rework sum parts.
      they say he comes like a thief in the night
      sum say, you see fire when he breathe on the mic!
      the legend has it his neck and his back is tatted
      and his arms are scriptures of Psalms!

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      • #4
        yeah 10x bout the feedback. some1 else can give some more feed

        PEACE

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        • #5
          yo dwg it was pretty simple,jus keep writin n like the others said n ull elevate

          peace
          You ain't got a truck that's hooked up with rims
          Kids'll see you like "damn, why I looked up to him?

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          • #6
            good and can relate. "i dont really care if u feelin me or not" dunno how u can say that then ask for opinions lol but nice stuff and keep it up

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            • #7
              10x bout that and dunno the exact date when obie's new album is comin out only know its gonna be this fall

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