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    Heart & The Wire

    { verse 1 }
    I spit through the wire see how i turned out
    I got cut by the same wire and my voice box burnt out
    An I still aint on the top of everybodys rap list
    But I could hit you wid a punchline even if i missed
    I've already made it this far named gap2gap
    I tried blastin but i've decided to go back to rap
    Back to the gap, back to the shady
    Sorry but i cant help what the lord made me
    If i could i would take back everything
    Since nothin really has a meaning
    I could make you mad in 5 bars
    But I got too many emotional scars
    From being backstabbed and hated
    I might have a problem but that aint gonna stop you from gettin your face grated

    { chorus }
    Add one more spike, one my thread
    Spit through the wire till im dead
    Add one more mic, one more rhyme
    Im never doin this for the last time

    { verse 2 }
    You've seen blood, yav seen sweat and yav seen tears
    And i've seen all this pain through 14 fuckin wasted years
    I've felt my skin torn apart by this wire
    I've felt the dishonesty of a liar
    I've felt the pain of a best friend takin away whats best
    I've fucked around with stuff that i shoulda just left
    If only you know how i feel like this wires feels my spit
    Been through my pain with me, it feels my shit
    Feels my flow, feels my pain, feels my motherfucker are you ready to go
    Hell no, i aint leavin till i got what i dserve, ya know
    I'm takin the game one bit at a time
    Stealin a bit more after every time that i rhyme
    Use my wire for my hatred my wire to hurt
    My wire is my only friend it helps me stay on alert

    { chorus }

    { verse 3 }
    When im all said and done and my wires no longer sharp
    When im layin resting around them angels wid the harps
    You gonna be thinkin gap2gap took this game
    Gap2gap this and gap2gap that ya so glad that i came
    So glad that i didnt leave
    Ya best believe i always got a trick up my sleeve
    To attack on you when im ready and get my wire to cause harm
    When you buggin out im still calm
    Still waitin and when the time is right
    Spit my soul through the wire my heart and all my anger and pain
    Will drive a man insane and just so you know im takin everybit of this game
    Its all mine i aint leavin a peice for you to pick
    A peice for a prick, pick up the wire, ima never quite
    My wires on fire with the burning sensatin of my heart my wires the shit

    { chorus }
    OH HAI!

  • #2
    yo man it was nice but i wasnt feelin the chorus,jus up on ur vocab n multis but besides that it was a gd topic n i enjoyd readin it,keep at it

    peace
    You ain't got a truck that's hooked up with rims
    Kids'll see you like "damn, why I looked up to him?

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    • #3
      Definitely worth reading.. maybe some more work on vocab but the Flow was great. Good job on this. well what else can i say.. some real tight lines too.
      R.I.P Proof
      ......
      get higher, get higher i never retire
      there is only two states to be in.. NSW & Stoned

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      • #4
        thanks man i put my heart into this and worked on it. thanks for bein real on the feed. repped
        OH HAI!

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        • #5
          i liked this alot. You could really feel and understand where you were comming from

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          • #6
            thanks, thanks alot
            OH HAI!

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            • #7
              hey man, its worth the read, no doubt.
              1st verse was the best.
              it realistic topic that i like to hear, im fealin this.
              u might beable to work on the corus a bit, but other then that theres not much wrong wid it.
              kool, keep it up man.
              peace.

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              • #8
                thanks man i know the chorus is a bit wierd but i sorta did it quick
                OH HAI!

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                • #9
                  I felt this shit , you just need to up your vocab and add multis , and I liked chorus

                  can you repay favour an give me a feed on my song EMOTIONS ERUPTION

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                  • #10
                    yea, def up the vocab, get some originality in there to define ya-self
                    Originally posted by Realize
                    evilspecialist has always been a god of poetry even before his join date of june 04

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                    • #11
                      thanks yall on gavin me some advise and fothe feed, repped
                      OH HAI!

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