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  • ''From Love to Hate'' {reps for feed}

    Aight this is something I wrote real quick...haven't made any adjustments to it so I just want some opinions - positive or negative I don't mind as long as they're constructive...

    You'll see for yourself what it's about..

    Life can be good but at the same time cause you pain,
    Release your hate so much that you want to beat your brain,
    Everyone make’s mistakes relationship’s easy to break,
    With my mum I just never had an easier way
    She was there for me – but in a violent way –
    Asking why the fuck she gave birth to me in the first place?
    That the doctors shouldn’t have saved me when I was born –
    From the first minute I entered life I guess I was deranged,
    It’s not easy to take away the anguish feelings that you feel,
    Believing you’re real – but you can’t achieve even religion won’t heal,
    How are you supposed to live if you don’t have a mother’s love?
    The bitch that brought you up breast fed you and used to give you hugs,
    And if she expected me to take care of her when I’m older she can go to hell,
    She wanted the best for me? Well my feelings for her began to melt,
    She couldn’t answer well – just had an obsession with swearing at me
    Telling me to die, no tears out of her eyes she’s emotionless,
    Heartless bitch that I wanted to kill every moment I was with –
    Her but fuck it she won’t always live,
    I can’t even see me at her funeral shit, no crying now she’s gone –
    Cos she didn’t do a thing, it just makes you think,
    That someone you knew for your whole life turned from love to hate so quick,
    ''One of the difficulties of the job is that we create 11 unemployed people and then, on Monday, we employee them again as if nothing has happened."

  • #2
    Uppin!
    ''One of the difficulties of the job is that we create 11 unemployed people and then, on Monday, we employee them again as if nothing has happened."

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    • #3
      Flows alright content wasnt dat great mothers a mother
      maybe you got some shit to get off your chest who knows
      keep @ it
      peace

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      • #4
        Yea lol...Anyway thanks for the feedback..repped

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        ''One of the difficulties of the job is that we create 11 unemployed people and then, on Monday, we employee them again as if nothing has happened."

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        • #5
          Maybe a little harsh but I dunno how it is in your shoes. I see what you mean man.. another great drop.
          R.I.P Proof
          ......
          get higher, get higher i never retire
          there is only two states to be in.. NSW & Stoned

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          • #6
            Hmm I don't like bringing my personal comments onto this board really but yeah I've been through a lot..and I'm not exaggerating but a lot of shit with my mum..it was just some shit to get off my chest but thanks for the feed

            Uppin
            ''One of the difficulties of the job is that we create 11 unemployed people and then, on Monday, we employee them again as if nothing has happened."

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            • #7
              ^theres nothing wrong with that.. if it'll make you feel better then why not get it out. aiighh peace man.
              R.I.P Proof
              ......
              get higher, get higher i never retire
              there is only two states to be in.. NSW & Stoned

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              • #8
                good shit(again) love the passion u put into ito it

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                • #9
                  You must spread some Reputation around before giving it to mwf again.

                  I'll get at you again as soon as I can ..thanks for the feed..and dead|ine I know lol I guess writing I find the best way to get out emotions/feelings
                  ''One of the difficulties of the job is that we create 11 unemployed people and then, on Monday, we employee them again as if nothing has happened."

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