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  • Shit on the mic Vol. 3 (Diss verse)

    To ToxN...

    Before I do damage, I'll admit you proved me wrong and fulfilled ya
    dream
    but if ya won't hot in VA what makes you feel skilled in Queens
    I'm about to change n!ggaz thoughts once I spill ya beans
    Once I slaughter you-3 more lyrical threats gonna kill ya team.
    Punk bitch chose money or "friendship", that exactly why I "sunk" ya "friend's ship"
    this n!gga really fled to NY cuz bloodz was after him when tried to defend crips.
    Once the *hen drips, Badnewz gonna purchase tickets and begin trips.
    To save cash I'll battle ya azz through the mail
    cause if I ever see you, "fluid comin out ya top", ya hood callin ya "whale"
    Badnewz bitch, we spitting 300 bars and "runnin", fool you about to get "trampled"
    ya time ain't ample, we not ta be fucked wit-and we gonna use you as an example.
    Don't even speak on no thug shit cuz you ain't got the hammer skills
    this dude "slippin", like we throwing out "banana peels"
    "Two teams collidin", dog it's like watching that old "Indiana" reel
    You can't even protect yaself, now I see how *Diana feel...

    Just a warm up, cuz we comin straight at em......




    *Hen-Hennessy
    *Diana- Girlfriend
    Last edited by Joker Boy; 08-19-2005, 04:46 PM.
    [email protected] Crew - NBK
    Hostile - Disrespek - J Rude - Joker - Yung Rice - Perk - Hitman Tez - Wild Card - E Mic - Ace - Sixxx

  • #2
    yo dawg i liked it,it had gd wordplay n full of mutlis n it flowed nice,jus up on ur vocab but besides that it was a hot piece,keep at it

    peace
    You ain't got a truck that's hooked up with rims
    Kids'll see you like "damn, why I looked up to him?

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    • #3
      thx
      [email protected] Crew - NBK
      Hostile - Disrespek - J Rude - Joker - Yung Rice - Perk - Hitman Tez - Wild Card - E Mic - Ace - Sixxx

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      • #4
        yeah good shit... flow was ok..multies are there..wordplay nice...vocab is better then average but need to step it up.....

        overal nice post man...

        p.s. go comment on my free...Ill shit..thank u!
        KEEP FUCKIN ARROUND!

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        • #5
          iight
          [email protected] Crew - NBK
          Hostile - Disrespek - J Rude - Joker - Yung Rice - Perk - Hitman Tez - Wild Card - E Mic - Ace - Sixxx

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          • #6
            dats tight for a diss man

            peace

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            • #7
              yo man could u check out mine n grandhustle19s new piece caus we both dropped feed for u

              peace
              You ain't got a truck that's hooked up with rims
              Kids'll see you like "damn, why I looked up to him?

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              • #8
                yea np
                [email protected] Crew - NBK
                Hostile - Disrespek - J Rude - Joker - Yung Rice - Perk - Hitman Tez - Wild Card - E Mic - Ace - Sixxx

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                • #9
                  .
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                  Hostile - Disrespek - J Rude - Joker - Yung Rice - Perk - Hitman Tez - Wild Card - E Mic - Ace - Sixxx

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                  • #10
                    more feedback you assholes.
                    [email protected] Crew - NBK
                    Hostile - Disrespek - J Rude - Joker - Yung Rice - Perk - Hitman Tez - Wild Card - E Mic - Ace - Sixxx

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                    • #11
                      yo this is the first peice im reading i its nasty kid, sick wit the flow on sum good old fashion battlle raps...4 sho mayne
                      they say he comes like a thief in the night
                      sum say, you see fire when he breathe on the mic!
                      the legend has it his neck and his back is tatted
                      and his arms are scriptures of Psalms!

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                      • #12
                        fuck toxN
                        BADNEWZ
                        JustRude-Joker Boy-Young Rice

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                        • #13
                          tight man
                          repps are welcome
                          -=|578|=-

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