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  • Kritikal Illness

    Yo- it's critical that you hear this
    critical that you feel this
    critical illness into ya dome
    shockwaves run thru ya home
    on the mic i murder any man known
    bitch i'm bad to the mother fuckin bone
    so i suggest you step back- gimmi my space
    get the hell out my face
    cuz i'm about to blow this place
    and in case you don't know me
    i'm Emcee None rollin with my homies
    reppin the vine- and got it blazing
    face it- they call me amazing
    some bitches call me crazy
    cuz i like them off the wall girls
    them fuckable pretty bitches- them call girls (huh)
    fuck it- don't judge just listen as i spit it
    bring it back- bridge the bgap and make it wicked
    see how many of you mothrt fuckers can get with it
    as i jump the stage- grab the mic and hit it

  • #2
    lines are basic , you need to up your vocab and add multis. Flow was good

    Keep elevating.

    can you repay favour and check my song Emotions Eruption

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    • #3
      yo lik ac3 said,mainly u should maybe work on better topics 2 write about but keep at it

      peace
      You ain't got a truck that's hooked up with rims
      Kids'll see you like "damn, why I looked up to him?

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      • #4
        word 2 what tha othaz mentioned
        flow was alright
        keep @ it

        Peace

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