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  • Loosin Control ft Grandhustle19(hot shit,plz peep)

    (Grandhuslte19)
    im loosin control in concentration awaiting where this trance would take me
    enthusiastic sensations revelation forsakin me greatly
    devestation or comfort while i proceeded not to choose
    truth what i had won set disagreement on what's absolute
    now engaging in proleptical* emotion stuck in the moment [fresh]
    embracing a skeptical focus hopin luck won't mis-own it
    eyes dilated witnessing tha haze i now seemed to portray
    mind intoxicated simmerin tha main intent i seemed unaimed to maintain
    feelin consumed by the vortex which now had me entrapped
    found no room in tha complex i retained in matta of fact
    tha atmosphere helped suffocate me making it hard to breath
    death was near containin me betrayed n scarred to proceed
    heart beat getting brought back by the operative static
    awoke to glance at doctor's keen to keep me active instead of tragic
    medical assistance is that the destiny i'm seeking
    fatal encounter towards greivance makin it hard for me to believe in
    became fragile n suicidal couldn't resist from overdosing
    refrained agile on my arrival could i make it to sobre hoping
    though still destructed while i risked my survival functions
    assumption constructed my own funeral how could i want this
    must've been no support which had me ceasing my own mind
    i laid petrified definin invalidatin vital signs
    bout to kross over to tha otha side what i needed was a miracle
    became a coma which helped me reside hence interrupting my visual
    my punishment accepted now blinded to helplessness
    maybe this is what my pride intended due to deprived self confidence

    CHORUS-(Jadaafa)
    LOOSIN CONTROL BUT I CANT CUT THE FINAL THREAD,
    LOVES THE TIE THAT BINDS ME SO I USE DENIAL INSTEAD,
    JUS WANTIN A RELEASE FROM THESE TORTUROUS TIMES,
    SCORCHIN IN HELLS FLAMES WONDERN IS MY FUTURE MINE


    (Jadaafa)
    im loosin control n lifes bruisn my soul,
    n im usin my whole wits in chosin my goals,
    as i try to enhance my chance of livin well,
    bt al i gt is a dance wit the devil n im givn hell,
    so i sit n begin stratedgisin my next plan
    n plottin my moves bt whys god antaganisin this one man,
    n makin me jus another casualty in hospitial,
    but anythings possible caus realitys jus psychological,
    though as i rise he jus sends more pain thats excruciatin,
    n its drivn me crazy,im goin insane n hullicinatin,
    hatin my cold fukin exsistence n feelin suicidal
    caus my whole struggles persistent wer once i was gods disciple
    now i want reunifiation bt its lik were hardcore rivils,
    askin for salvation n declarin eternal dedication
    bt still my lifes crumblin along wit its external foundation,
    so i c my reflection as i pt the blade 2 my wrist,
    wondern could this b my direction n how hav i faded 2 this,
    caus al my lifes work n aspirations r disappearin,
    n my dreams n visions r evaporatin n clearin,
    n only scars r remainin as im enslaved 2 misery,
    fightn a spiritual war but now im engaged in it physically,
    caus the grave is my destination wer ill b immersd by dirt,
    dyn frm starvation caus im incarcaratd n cursd 2 hurt,
    n gods my witness ive asked for forgivness n redemption,
    bt my pre-emption was wrong caus i aint got a excemption,
    but im not askin 2 go 2 heaven jus that u no i believe,
    as i fall 2 my knees n wit my last breath il ask plz.....

    yo peeps wat us think of this collab,uppin for feed,uppin.............
    Last edited by jadaafa; 08-21-2005, 04:45 AM.
    You ain't got a truck that's hooked up with rims
    Kids'll see you like "damn, why I looked up to him?

  • #2
    only read part of grandhustle's verse, it was tight, talk about improvement

    read some of urs jadaafa's but it kinda pointless ur verses are always kool
    Originally posted by Realize
    evilspecialist has always been a god of poetry even before his join date of june 04

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    • #3
      yea Grandhustle19 improved n changed a ton it seems...I liked your verse
      Same with Jadaafa both had very good vocab a very good piece btw could one of y'all check out my latest drop

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      • #4
        yo dawg thanks n in future could u read the whole shit n leave sum gd feed,it helps us elevate n shit if ppl arent gonna read my verses then i should think about quittin this board caus i dont want it cumin to that,well thanks for the feed n ur repped,uppin.................
        You ain't got a truck that's hooked up with rims
        Kids'll see you like "damn, why I looked up to him?

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        • #5
          thanks for tha feed evil yeah man im tryna elevate especially wit tha hot shit Jadaafa's spittin to keep motivated

          peace

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          • #6
            thanks for feed man CT9
            no hate man keep @ it
            peace

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            • #7
              well.. jadaafa you should try a completely different topic, just something new, if you're already good @ one style of writing, you should try others
              Originally posted by Realize
              evilspecialist has always been a god of poetry even before his join date of june 04

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              • #8
                ok man im branchin out but there isnt any point on puttn them up here if fuks lik u arent gonna read it n jus pawn it of n say didnt read it but all ur stuffs gd,wat the fuk,thats a whole waste of time for me writin it n postin it n if u wanna say anything else pm me caus i dont want u spammin.uppin for feed on this....................
                You ain't got a truck that's hooked up with rims
                Kids'll see you like "damn, why I looked up to him?

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                • #9
                  i dont read all of it, cause i expect it to be good, and i expect the same concepts, innovation is the way to go.. sorry for saying u was the shit, if u cant take a damn compliment, than nevermind
                  Originally posted by Realize
                  evilspecialist has always been a god of poetry even before his join date of june 04

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                  • #10
                    i can take a compliment but how do u no i deserved the compliment when i coulda been lackluster n put out sum weak shit but it dosnt matter n if u git any more shit 2 say then pm me caus as symptom says i dont want u spammin this thread,uppin for sum real feed................
                    You ain't got a truck that's hooked up with rims
                    Kids'll see you like "damn, why I looked up to him?

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                    • #11
                      looks good!!
                      R.I.P. Proof
                      1973-2006

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                      • #12
                        thanks n that was my real number i gave u,uppin for more feed,uppin..............
                        You ain't got a truck that's hooked up with rims
                        Kids'll see you like "damn, why I looked up to him?

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                        • #13
                          uppin for more feed....................
                          You ain't got a truck that's hooked up with rims
                          Kids'll see you like "damn, why I looked up to him?

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                          • #14
                            thats good , grandhustle19 you need to use multis , vocab is good for both of you. I think Jadaafa verse was better , but grandhustle19 your was good too. I like chorus

                            Jadaafa can you leave a feed on my song EMOTIONS ERUPTION

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                            • #15
                              yeah ill peep it now n thanks for the feed,uppin................
                              You ain't got a truck that's hooked up with rims
                              Kids'll see you like "damn, why I looked up to him?

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