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  • Some random song i wrote wen i was high.

    mic check.
    i stepped into the cypher. like a venom viper.
    to shoot words down on MC's like a rooftop sniper.
    direct aim to the head to disconnect the skills they spread.
    people fled when the ill rhyma sprayed the led.
    to hang MC's from they neck like a necklace.
    im reckless so i tick rappers of my list like a check list.
    beat em down towards the concerete solid ground.
    and my renowned sound sorroundes other victims by rebounds.
    1 of the MC's started to run,
    other 5 of em were dead so i reached for my pocket to pull out my gun.
    i shot at him 5 times and they all missed.
    how could this bitch survive my ferociose rhymes and still resist.
    so i chased afta him, i will persist.
    this lil bitch aint runnin, afta he through wid me he wont exist.
    i catched him, saw his face identified and matched him from my database,
    no file was matchin.
    and then i saw the evil inside,
    the heavens cried every encense inside of wellbeing fell down and died.
    there was no conclusion exept this was jus an illusion.
    every battle i been in killed the opponent by confusion.
    finaly my mind technology found the match of this biology
    this MC that had a hex on me was a genetic replica of me.
    i stood back from lack of plan and attack
    from the fact i didnt know how to react to such a suprising impact.
    i forgot my lines that i designed to blind him, i think youll find
    im left confined lookin behind my own rhyme i had to remind myself,
    not to allow this fake destroy my health,
    i had to use stealth to kill this bitch and still walk away wid my wealth.
    so i had to spit shit exquisit xplicit and scientificly statistic.
    and stay kool, try to be realistic, to not go belistic.
    battlin myself would be the most challenging thing to me yet.
    this is when i had regrets of managin to kill like a death threat.
    a new door opend up in my head
    the possibility of battlin wid bloodshed was close to 100 percent.
    my enemy started rappin.
    he started tellin me that he wont back down and he gonna start snappin.
    my bones, he go make me pay like bank loans.
    then he started rappin a verse as hard as stones from flintstones.
    i was scared that this is someone who actually compared to my skills and my kills
    and this is also someone wid the same flow we shared.
    took back from the occasion, i took this as an invasion
    no persuasion wld force me to battle myself, i jus couldnt figure the equation.
    i was confused, my skill was misused
    and i refused to accept the fact that im gettin abused and bruised
    this duplicate was amused and i suddenly heard that he used a line i spat in the cypher earlier,
    for this he wont be exused.
    i finaly realised he was a biter.
    not a fighter just a writer of sumin i allready done earlier.
    so i turned around wid a new tactic.
    and started to persue this new plan, new rap to make this Biter look like a spastic.
    as soon as he saw the evil in my face he realised he go get maced
    wiv the poinson words im jus about to spit to replace him in disgrace.
    words came out of my mouth accusin him of bittin.
    in the first few lines i cld allready see he was losin all the might in him.
    he was startin to evaporate.
    so i took this chance to beat and oblitirate.
    this all seem to go so fast it didnt seem to last.
    i felt happy cuz im killin this bitch like an atomin bomb blast.
    2 more stages to kill this fake clone.
    awake the gods of war, Switch-B came through the mist and killed him of the top of his dome.
    fianaly i got him in a position that i can finish him.
    the toughest battle i ever been in is about to end wid my enemy in submission.
    im now immortal ready to slaughter this wack mortal.
    i turned my back and forced him to walk through my death portal.

    man, i was pretty out of it.
    my m8 sed i freestyled sum of it, but i dunno.
    i was high wen i did it.
    feed back if u want ^^
    i have a fealin its bad 2#:-(
    peace.

  • #2
    LMFAO!!!!!!!!
    i have actually red what i wrote now ^^

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    • #3
      lol its actually alright to se ya wa high man.
      OH HAI!

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      • #4
        lol ^^
        im embarassed by that verse.

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        • #5
          verse? it wa more like a fukin song lol, ya know what it reminded me of? Nail in the coffin by eminem, ya just need to add a chorus at the beginin and end lol
          OH HAI!

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          • #6
            ^^ i preformed it to a real fast beat.
            it fits well wid a fast beat.
            the only problem is its hard to spit ^^
            the song is supposed to be preformed fast

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            • #7
              fuckin hell tha must spit it real fast lol wi size of the lines
              OH HAI!

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              • #8
                ye man ^^
                very fast. i just tried, its doable. but very tireing.

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                • #9
                  can ya put it in audio i wanna here it
                  OH HAI!

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                  • #10
                    =( i havent got the equipment for that, and i dont know any 1 who has.
                    and, my voice is deep ^^ lol!

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                    • #11
                      but, if it ever dus get on audio, i will giv u a shout.
                      but anyway, is it actually any good?

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                      • #12
                        ok man. i think its good, its sorta fun but thats my opinion man an i cant rep ya coz i gota spread more or some shit
                        OH HAI!

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                        • #13
                          thats ok and thnx man, but what do u mean by fun?

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