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  • The Rothus, The Psycho, The Shadow(ill stuff)(will rep for honest feed)

    The Rothus, The Psycho, The Shadow

    Talking
    I think its time to dive a lil deeper into Rothus. See what he’s really thinking cuss their more then one side to all story’s

    Verse 1
    The Rothus
    Im a curious mastermind furious for actual recognition
    Underestimated Rapper is an factual condition
    My mission is to leap bounds over my opposition
    My ambition keeps me catching up with my competition
    So Listen
    Im the redefinition of an art exhibition
    Being in the same hallway is an unfavorable position
    Ya shit is a disgrace to my musical composition
    Pack ya shit up ya raps are out of commission
    Keep Wishin
    Fix up your 50 cent style while in the missionary position
    with ya money hungry producers is your only proposition

    Talking
    You got to be fucking kidding me, what the fuck did you just say bitch haha? *****s are still sleeping on me? They just made

    a grave mistake....

    Verse 2
    The Psycho
    I get satisfaction off the madness of this liquid orb
    I create a ripple of laughter from the sadness I continuously absorb
    A great fraction of the actions that is a main attraction for me
    involves traction between a faction, this is satisfaction to me
    Interactions between my self and others is abrupt or everlasting
    Plan of action is to take out competition quick, for small fry’s the pain is lasting
    I got carnivore’s vasting; I got em sick of the smell of fresh blood
    Got flash floods of severed heads floating in a mixture of warm blood, cold mud
    This is that real crazed shit, ill snap like twigs in seconds
    Got demons commin for seconds when they reckon my raps beckons
    I wasn’t raised by lunatics or phased by crazed media
    I was amazed by the world’s carnage like a blazed, hell bound encyclopedia

    Talking
    I farther I go the deeper into the rabbit hole I go. In no win situations the shadow just seems to consume me...

    Verse 3
    The Shadow
    Im like a gallow
    What ever the situation I stay lurking behind you
    Im much more than a dark figure im like the soul outside you
    Im not spawned by sunlight shinning down on you
    Im the darkness that spews from your shallow hearts around upon you
    I warp your decisions like a writer doing provisions
    Im that force that pushes men to start pursing collisions
    I stay etched into your mind and sketched in your senses
    This aint farfetched, I leave your shields outstretched to protect defenses
    I help you evade federal offenses when the heat commences
    but when the heat gets to great this creature suddenly dispenses

    Chorus (repeat 2)
    The Rothus, The Psycho, The Shadow
    The pain
    What ever the situation I switch for my gain
    The Rothus, The Psycho, The Shadow
    The pain
    Few forces on this earth can stop my brains campaign

  • #2
    Chorus somewhat similar to Damien performed by DMX in my opinion
    overall tight content n flows - good shit
    keep em posted

    peace

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    • #3
      wrote that chorus pretty quick to finish off lol. anyways thanks for feed back

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      • #4
        yo dagw nice shit n gd topic,flow was quite gd,vocab was gd n u had a few multis,jus up on them n could u check out mine n grandhustle19 new shit

        peace
        You ain't got a truck that's hooked up with rims
        Kids'll see you like "damn, why I looked up to him?

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        • #5
          yeah ill check it out.

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          • #6
            n could u check out verbal outreachs new song calld soldier plz

            peace
            You ain't got a truck that's hooked up with rims
            Kids'll see you like "damn, why I looked up to him?

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            • #7
              How did you find three emcees who have a creative flare that far outshines most rappers in this biz...?
              Top shit yall loved every word.

              Fave:
              Im the redefinition of an art exhibition
              Being in the same hallway is an unfavorable position

              This is that real crazed shit, ill snap like twigs in seconds
              Got demons commin for seconds when they reckon my raps beckons

              This aint farfetched, I leave your shields outstretched to protect defenses
              I help you evade federal offenses when the heat commences
              _____________________________

              They call me Sinful for a reason.....
              Think about it.....

              _____________________________

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              • #8
                yo thanks for the feed. ill be sure to return the favor when you write some new stuff.

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                • #9
                  It's a creative piece plus the vocab is good and the rhyming is nice. I personally think it would be cool if you try to go for around 3-5 syllable rhymes, but they aren't essential.
                  P!

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                  • #10
                    That was awesome Rothus... reminded me of DMX also, but more "Stop Being Greedy" than "Damien". Nice concept, the vocabulary would probably be called advanced, and you carried the idead out well. I liked the talking transitions also, it set up the verses. 10/10
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                    • #11
                      tight shit ^ keep that shit up ;P make an audio ^ ! :]
                      -PeicyP

                      "Shit wherever I want, can't deal with constipation." -WIZ

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