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  • Carry The Weight Ft Jadaafa [Hot/New Shit]

    [Jadaafa]

    yo in the distance are prosperity shows glimmers,
    and slowly are moment of clarity grows dimmer,
    n the red line becomes thinner as hostility deepins,
    n the limits steepin wit fiends in the dark creepin,
    heepin pressure on my shoulders as i thrive 2 survive,
    meetn measures i hav 2 jus 2 defeat my foes n stay alive,
    caus growin up n my childhood my ppl were labled tyrants,
    caus we did evil bt thats becaus we nevr had a stable enviroment,
    2 settle down in caus in ireland peace was non-exsistent,
    it was reminiscent to hell so we calld for gods assitence,
    before r society fell,single handliy workin for freedom,
    outside in the cold freezin jus searchin for a reason,
    as to why are virtues collided n are country divided,
    or why we turned on eachother n are structure subcided,
    caus r thoughts for eachother grew the same,cannibilistic,
    n specific 2 death n the traps of the street i couldnt resist it,

    [Chorus - Jadaafa]

    i gotta carry the weight n steady my pace,
    i gotta embrace my fate n capture the dreams i chase,
    i gotta clutch onto all the things i hold dear,
    n prepare caus the cold times are near

    [grandhustle]

    counselin adeloscence n occupyin debts
    watchin down-falls in friendships n denyin threats
    so evident furious at tha strukture definin unstable
    cold residence curious as to when my harmonizin's enabled
    raised crazed tryna pursue on dis negative mind state
    such a shame accused in tha governments delikate crime rate
    facin losses wit caution dealin wit various proportions
    sides krossin dis life appealin wit it's hysterious kostin
    hard to take it watchin patricians benefit wit pleasure
    tryna make it wit shattered ambitions how they indefinite our measures
    endeavour towards peace but find it so restriktin
    from tha convictin maintainin ease in attempt to keep on persistin
    mental impaired by dis nation while i keep to what i have to
    ive done declared revelation whether you find it irrational

  • #2
    Nice....I didn't really like the flow in some parts...but for the most part it flowed...Def. feelin' the hook...Was feelin' the first verse more than the 2nd...but overall 8.5/10
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    • #3
      Thanks for feed man

      peace

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      • #4
        yeah def good shit... plus i was listenin to a beat at the sametime and i was like shit...their text goes with this beat ...anyway good shit
        good flow...nice vocab..subject..hook was tight
        KEEP FUCKIN ARROUND!

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        • #5
          Thanks for feed man - would rep you but i gotta spread some
          keep @ ur flows man

          peace

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          • #6
            anyway..umm..whats rep for lol...i never rep someone lol
            KEEP FUCKIN ARROUND!

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            • #7
              man i joined tha same time as you - the red bars next to your amount of posts
              your stats r on fire try keep ur shit green dogg
              check your user cp to see who repped u
              jus pm me if u got any concernz i kant be fucked floodin tha threads

              peace

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              • #8
                good collab. i like the chorus. keep at it

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                • #9
                  yo man thanks for the feed,uppin..............
                  You ain't got a truck that's hooked up with rims
                  Kids'll see you like "damn, why I looked up to him?

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                  • #10
                    i ddint really see much at all wrong with jadaafas. Flowed pretty nice, good vocab, and painted the picture in my mind aswell. grandhustles kinda didnt flow at parts but was still good.

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                    • #11
                      yo thanks again for the feed man,its much appreciated,uppin for more...............
                      You ain't got a truck that's hooked up with rims
                      Kids'll see you like "damn, why I looked up to him?

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                      • #12
                        c'mon uppin dont sleep on this.............
                        You ain't got a truck that's hooked up with rims
                        Kids'll see you like "damn, why I looked up to him?

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