Honesty Kills

[Symptom]

To the point where you break, there's-no-return
To the point where you shake, cares-aren't-churned
To the point where you pray, evil-isn't-aloud
To the point where you slay,*, people-can't-sprout (Grow, reproduce)
To the point where you snap, pieces-to-the-puzzle-don't-fit (Snap, break)
To the point where you slap, greetings-to-the-muzzles-won't-grip**
To the point where you lie, truth-becomes-imaginary
To the point where you cry, spoofs-become-involuntary
To the point where you callapse, the real-unfolds
To the point where you realize, to feel-is-cold (As in feeling emotion, it's evil)

*Kill
**Muzzles, as in for dogs. They keep dogs from biting people...

[DeVere]

wow.... i really liked the flow. fit real well.
and good concept to.
keep it up.

[SlimShady02]

Hott shit dawg, loved the theme of this.

[FeLoNiEs]

Ehh I guess Its Ok, But Freepost!

[Symptom]

^Loser! SlimShady02, I'm a girl, but I guess you can still call me dawg.

Uppin'.

[FeLoNiEs]

Eh You Suck^! BOOO! Lol!

[SlimShady02]

I know your a girl lol, I've been around here a while (kinda) I just don't post much, I just like to read what other people write. But I'm gonna post something soon.

[Symptom]

^Okay, just makin' sure. Stop freepostin', FeLoNiEs. You're the reason I wanna be a moderator.

[FeLoNiEs]

LOL^, Your A Liar, You Would Never Delete My Posts!

[AC3]

good flow , multis , vocab but I have seen more better from you

[pandemic]

The vocab is really lacking in this one and some of the multis don't go too well together because some of them are different syllables. Plus the multis seemed a little too forced at least to me.

Sorry, but you need to try harder next time. Peace.

[Rodamón]

world real fit. good man

[jadaafa]

yo nice shit sy,ptom but not up 2 ur standards that were used 2 but it was still hot shice

could u check out my new couple of collabs plz

peace

[Symptom]

^Yea, I'm going to add to it, make it a song. Look out for it. Should be up tonight, or tomorrow. Whenever I feel like it.