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    stress on atrocity
    while i spit with dynamic viscosity
    my energitic spit not disgustin me
    ferocity trhu my monstrosity
    aesthetic shit as you can see
    poetic lyrics not comin out from me
    but out from me, energy kinetic
    got athletic scheme from my genetic
    my works not made yet like a minuet
    its too violent like a swingnin kit
    im doin with my lyrics,stocks splits
    while u stil on tha same ol stone spit
    readin this shit will get ur mouth split
    like bittin two s-p-a-de-s bit ( say thw word not the letter just cuz it wont let me type it look *****s)
    ur style needs a change bitch
    omit to admitt im drinkin gas jet
    helpin me puttin whack mc`s offset
    with my skills im megalomaniac
    u readin em,u change in nymphomaniac
    wantin lyrical sex from my rap
    a critical death from my slap
    certainly not a gleeful act in my chat
    originally born bad boy dumbass that u woundt catch
    dissin motherfucker just cuz they wearin hat
    the pope ,u my mother, i dont give a fuck who am spittin at
    even if yall think that am fuckin whack
    yall suck,u couldnt improve yall rhymin lack
    fat ass beat,phatfarm T,got ass place,reform me?
    nah,im good poor and beated,on the floor defeated
    blunted and weeded,seated in blood
    got my ass lifted and feeded by thug
    ask for help and get no love
    just felt a sec and get heard of
    (ur gay ass bitch weak!), thats whith what ull get shove( they said ur gay wass..
    as humiliatin as wearin a robe
    see im sick and thick cuz all of these probs( problems)

    please leave commments
    KEEP FUCKIN ARROUND!

  • #2
    comments please
    KEEP FUCKIN ARROUND!

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    • #3
      man good to see you keepin @ it
      should aim more at your multi's too since im weak @ that aswell
      otherwise flow rhymed for most bits n yeah maybe you got a way of spittin this ill
      who knows
      keep @ it man some nice vocab in this piece
      peace

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      • #4
        thanks dude........
        and yeah im keepin at it...cuz to be better u have to keep practicin..u know!
        KEEP FUCKIN ARROUND!

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        • #5
          good spit. mayb u tried to use....mm...too many methapors but if is this shit written is true, i liked it. good flow n lyrics. keep it, hater

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          • #6
            thanks alot super beer duff simpson man!!!
            lol....
            but there was not that much metahpores in there
            KEEP FUCKIN ARROUND!

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            • #7
              ye u right. i should change my glasses lol

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              • #8
                uppin
                KEEP FUCKIN ARROUND!

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