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  • Quick Keystyle - [Reps for Feed]

    Meh feedback would be nice lol I got bored so figured why not -


    I grab the left hand of god’s and the right of the devils,
    Make them both come together like it was essential,
    I have the potential and talent to scribble with the pencil,
    And make the lead dribble and tremble on a high level,
    I clasp your heart with my hands at last,
    Fire blasts through your veins leaving permanent marks,
    You got class with raps? Well I rap with class,
    And leave you stranded like being Lost in the Dark,
    My armour with words is a talent for you it’s a task,
    You couldn’t clasp my intellect or stay ahead,
    Even if you’re dick was 15 inches hard, (damn)
    You’re a failure always coming last,
    Smack you so back so much I’ll leave you in the past tense –
    Call this shit art,
    My dialect is intriguing you’re an idiot I’m smart,
    It’s not hard to figure out – it’s best that you just leave me in charge,
    ''One of the difficulties of the job is that we create 11 unemployed people and then, on Monday, we employee them again as if nothing has happened."

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    ''One of the difficulties of the job is that we create 11 unemployed people and then, on Monday, we employee them again as if nothing has happened."

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    • #3
      Liked the flow at most bits man - especially the introductory bars
      like how you came up wit dat
      read some of your better pieces but good shit

      keep @ it
      peace

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      • #4
        good flow n nice lyrics n methaphors real good, the first lines very good. keep at ittt

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        • #5
          Props guys

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          ''One of the difficulties of the job is that we create 11 unemployed people and then, on Monday, we employee them again as if nothing has happened."

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          • #6
            i like it good all through
            Originally posted by Jay-z
            The chain remains, the gang is intact
            The name is mine, I'll take blame for that
            The pressures on, but guess who ain't gon' crack?
            *Ha Ha* Pardon me, I had to laugh at that

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            • #7
              Props

              Uppin
              ''One of the difficulties of the job is that we create 11 unemployed people and then, on Monday, we employee them again as if nothing has happened."

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              • #8
                Shit was nice bro. Lost a bit of the flow towards the end but the first 5 bars were fuckin hot. Loved the vokab and structre in this peice homie
                _____________________________

                They call me Sinful for a reason.....
                Think about it.....

                _____________________________

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                • #9
                  well yea...i was expecting some wack piece of shit...
                  but no i was wrong...it was good yo...keep it up!
                  *~FUCK COPZ! LEGALIZE ART!~*

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                  • #10
                    Lol ok

                    Uppin
                    ''One of the difficulties of the job is that we create 11 unemployed people and then, on Monday, we employee them again as if nothing has happened."

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                    • #11
                      good flow great lyris great rimes nice man keep it up
                      8.5/10
                      -=|57¤8|=-

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                      • #12
                        i just love the first line so much. nice allaround too.

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                        • #13
                          this shit was awes 9/10
                          yall done fucked up now endagered the industry better be prepared it's the return of conspiracy

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                          • #14
                            Props people!!!

                            Uppin
                            ''One of the difficulties of the job is that we create 11 unemployed people and then, on Monday, we employee them again as if nothing has happened."

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                            • #15
                              seen better from you ash...

                              some pretty good multies at times, flow was on point throughout though...
                              SpurattiK

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