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    aint nobody write-raps like-Matt/
    i put a spiked-bat to this guys-back for his Nike-cap/
    i strike-wacks, and steal bicycle's from bike-rack's/
    i might-dare-wack-ya's, for them Nike-Air-Max's/
    ridin' locomotive's, attackin folks-wit-motive's wit brokin-phone-bits/
    gropin-hoe's-tit's, my spokin-flow-rips thru seventy-enemies/
    demons out ta get me, tha devil sent'em-to-severe-me/
    lemme tell-this, we rebeleous and out-fist all u foul-bitch's/
    walk around wit opened wounds without-stitch's, gun plus ski mask amounts-rich's/
    i spray-rounds at kids in play-grounds, whiles folks be yellin "stay-down, stay-down"/
    aint no helpin-it, im out-ta-get, tha muthafucken alphabet/
    wrote a verse and attatched stealth-to-it, dropped it in an open-MIC/
    high on dope-coke-n-ice, chocked-a-dyke and rid off on her broken-bike/
    round here its sport-n-rappin, cops flauntin-batons/
    bodies outlined in chalk-can-happin, criminal's same old walkin-patterns/
    THEFT, robbin-wrist's, robbin-neck's, VIOLENCE, bobbin-fist's, bobbin-Tech's.
    Last edited by AwkWordz; 08-22-2005, 10:48 AM.
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  • #2
    Hmm not bad I thought some of the vocab/rhyming was forced...and please please do not rap about Nike lmao..I just don't like when people do that...I mean you can use it ..but in a stylish way..like I don't know

    ''I'll swish past you like the nike tick'' or ''If Nike can do it - than I can do it'' something like that haha ok..
    But overall not bad man..
    ''One of the difficulties of the job is that we create 11 unemployed people and then, on Monday, we employee them again as if nothing has happened."

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    • #3
      cheers bruz
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      • #4
        aye check me out, recognize a rap
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        • #5
          uppin for feedback, anything i can fix on my writing of verse's
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          • #6
            It was good but I wasn't totally feelin the topic really, and yea like ashtray said some rhymes seemed forced. Other than that though it was good

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