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    he was outdated addikted remaining intoxicated
    it was created skeptik wit thoughts obtainin devestated
    he seemed to hate it so senseless his senses had faded
    need to retain shit - self acceptence - decepted n nameless
    couldn't blame him constant marijuana had him trippin
    couldn't re-arrange him towards his persona he held tha gat it had him grippin
    nearly slippin like a itchy trigga finga to tha issue
    barely missin tha fuckin intent he held inside to diss u
    more then visual tha streets had him locked like on house probation
    explorin rituals indeed in tha spot he'd browse situation
    declaration his conscious became multiple like a multi
    unresponsive to vulnerable although seemin to invite tha faulty
    thoughts revoltin like a massacre tryna embellish wit gore
    caught supposin up in his bitch why should i cherish dis whore
    no more he couldn't take it needed to break away
    encore never replacive watched his old self fade away
    Last edited by grandhustle19; 09-06-2005, 11:51 PM.

  • #2
    it was cool
    but..i wasnt catchin the flow...
    but u got good vocab...
    and good lines..kee on workin on multies

    by tha way...yo..dont just always put some searched vocab ..cuz ull get away from the flow
    but if u think u can do both have a good flow and have some super words then kee on workin...
    anyway good work dude
    KEEP FUCKIN ARROUND!

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    • #3
      i like the 4 first lines. i like the lyrics of the whole spit too. the flow was ok. (i think i cant judge the flow if i dont hear this). keep at it dude

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      • #4
        yeah..thats true it depends on how u say it....
        KEEP FUCKIN ARROUND!

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        • #5
          I could feel the flo I think its good but w/e and it seems like your startin to get down multi's it was good 8.5/10 I jus couldnt get a lot of emotion from it but it still was good

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          • #6
            yo man nice shit n ur elevatin wit each one of ur spits n check ur pm's,keep at it man

            peace
            You ain't got a truck that's hooked up with rims
            Kids'll see you like "damn, why I looked up to him?

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            • #7
              thanks for feed n advice ppl - n yeah dogg i jus pm'd you
              n yeah i gotta spread some rep around to tha worthy before bein able to rep all ya'll again besides Rodamon - i managed to keep to what it says in tha title

              Thanks

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