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    All you did was test me, tried to get the best of me, i'll admit you made a mess of me, i guess it was destiny, since u left i made little progress, i thought about what u said, let it settle in my head and digest, now all i wanna do is regress, were going at eachother, it's a chess match, nobody knows our next moves, u treated me as a pawn, and now your gone, u don't wanna know what i've been on since u walked off my lawn, now our swords are drawn, it's double-edged, neither of us r gonna win, so why did we begin this relationship we're in. But when i see that sexy grin, it makes me wanna do it all over again.

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    Not too bad Mark, the rhymes were pretty simple, but it had content and the flow was good too. I'd give it a 6.5 or 7 out of 10...
    Free Agent
    3 Wins - 3 KOs - 2 Losses

    .:::STREET DISCIPLES:::.
    |GAP2GAP|CT9|SWITCH-B|
    |Vokab|Green Chronic|

    0 Wins - 0 KOs - 0 Losses

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    • #3
      its kool man
      "My heart aches with the pain, the life in his breath
      We gotta have fun now, theres only minutes left"

      Deshaun Holton
      Rest In Peace Hommie

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      • #4
        good, its now in the freestyle forum.
        not the eminem forum.
        "All you did was test me, tried to get the best of me, i'll admit you made a mess of me, i guess it was destiny"
        nice. keep it up man

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        • #5
          its cool...
          i gave you some rep man...because you got that lil red box for no reason...

          peace
          *~FUCK COPZ! LEGALIZE ART!~*

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          • #6
            cool
            Originally posted by Jay-z
            The chain remains, the gang is intact
            The name is mine, I'll take blame for that
            The pressures on, but guess who ain't gon' crack?
            *Ha Ha* Pardon me, I had to laugh at that

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            • #7
              hey encor3, fuck you.
              sendin me bad rep cuz u think im "gay"
              i think i lost about 3 points.
              Last edited by DeVere; 08-23-2005, 08:37 AM.

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              • #8
                you are gay?
                *~FUCK COPZ! LEGALIZE ART!~*

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                • #9
                  no im not gay.
                  encor3 jus bein sad.

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                  • #10
                    by the way i voted for you in that Gap2Gap vs. Mc Konman topic...
                    *~FUCK COPZ! LEGALIZE ART!~*

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                    • #11
                      thnx man, repped ya.

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                      • #12
                        MC i cnt give bad rep im new it comes as a blue square so fuk u
                        Originally posted by Jay-z
                        The chain remains, the gang is intact
                        The name is mine, I'll take blame for that
                        The pressures on, but guess who ain't gon' crack?
                        *Ha Ha* Pardon me, I had to laugh at that

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                        • #13
                          fuck you you twat.....
                          it came up as a blue square, sayin from encore.

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                          • #14
                            "u r fuking gay from Encor3 and im not scared to leave my name cos i got lots of good rep bitch haha"
                            thats what the rep ses.

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                            • #15
                              lol at this thread suddenly becomin a freepost
                              nice drop mark, but try n write ur shit in bars that way its eazier 2 read
                              simple rhymes but thats also good n fits the flow
                              keep it up

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