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  • Freestyle 101

    the name is Erase and this is my freestyle 101
    please hold the applause until I'm done
    just listen up while I take you motherfuckers to school
    you will learn how to lay down the skills I ain't no fool
    if you don't think I can rap then you don't know who I am
    I take bitches money just like uncle sam
    yeah some day I will be rollin' in a big body benz
    that comes after years of rappin' and creating sins
    but no matter what god will let me through those pearly gates
    still people are hating on me, they don't realize that I have what it takes
    to win over the bitches hearts in the club
    all I need to do is buy them I bottle of bub
    then they will be all over me
    b/c they know that Erase is the greatest MC
    so what have you learned in this flow?
    I've schooled you in rhymes and how to get the hoes
    so this is my exiting note on this verse
    I don't know why I'm so good, it's like a curse
    MC ERASE ------------------------------------- MC ERASE
    www.myspace.com/mcerase
    MC ERASE ------------------------------------- MC ERASE

  • #2
    its ok, u need to elevate tho.
    it will happen, takes time.
    keep it up man. peace.

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    • #3
      Its Cool
      Originally posted by Jay-z
      The chain remains, the gang is intact
      The name is mine, I'll take blame for that
      The pressures on, but guess who ain't gon' crack?
      *Ha Ha* Pardon me, I had to laugh at that

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      • #4
        lines were near basic , you need elevate , you know , up vocab , use multis and so on.
        just practice and you will elevate , I was writting like that when I started

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