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    man i aint playin let dese kids know dat im an out-law
    aint insane in sayin dat u n ur kinsfolk dont know about war
    i seem to doubt yall using ur own content to appraise ya
    bitch's behaviour im physikally stompin lyrikkly a hell-raiser
    man your shit is whack you've already seen me define description
    whether you lace tha track i've got my lyrikal guide for my mind's assistance
    i aint a gangsta - at times i've proved a hustla n thug
    wanna secrete dese wankstaz especially wit my mind bein a cluster n drugs
    go negotiate ur issues grievin while ur prides unattended
    i exfoliate ur tissues ur brain decreasin while behind resentment
    man i was raised in kuruption while i kept to maintainin functions
    you got blazed faced disruption ever since been complainin assumptions
    like a hoax im disguised unknowin factors i wont talk
    tryna cope on my third-strike towards impisonment i won't walk
    im on call on point i make my own enemies fall
    for sure i minimize their pride when it tends to be tall
    must be intimidated by my presence or hating the essence of my lessons
    never weak when participated due to the crescent of my stressin
    i kick back wit my doggs sportin red like displayin a bloodline
    we escortin dis trap in full-pledge while evadin tha one-time
    murder ya fake mind i dont give a fuck about ur feelin obliged definitions
    im makin it written wit this ur stuck while revealin ur life's intermission
    im strait coastin n rhymin while u jus out boastin n whinin
    ur too late focussed on my demise n ill help be ur life's host n declinin

  • #2
    8/10...kinda hard to read sometimes with your not typin' in English lol...but I liked what I could understand lol....(sorry itz early here...i'm tired and can't read to begin with)

    Nice shit...check out my 1st Time For Everything...
    Download my new mixtape "Public Axis Vol. 1" http://www.sendspace.com/file/7527jn
    New Beats: www.soundclick.com/axisproductions
    Mixing/Mastering available! PM for details.

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    • #3
      thanks for the feed yeah ill do that

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      • #4
        fuk me that is awsome
        "My heart aches with the pain, the life in his breath
        We gotta have fun now, theres only minutes left"

        Deshaun Holton
        Rest In Peace Hommie

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        • #5
          aight I have seen better from you , I think flow was off at some points. But overal its very good

          and PM me if you have some topics for our next song

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          • #6
            Thanks for feed n AC3 hpefully i cn think of smething

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            • #7
              8/10
              Originally posted by Jay-z
              The chain remains, the gang is intact
              The name is mine, I'll take blame for that
              The pressures on, but guess who ain't gon' crack?
              *Ha Ha* Pardon me, I had to laugh at that

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              • #8
                7/10 because your other work latley has been better than this one. Yea I also think your flow was off vocab was good however. Keep it up though still was good

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                • #9
                  yo man nice shit n i already told u it was brillaint,check ur pms dawg n hit me back

                  peace
                  You ain't got a truck that's hooked up with rims
                  Kids'll see you like "damn, why I looked up to him?

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