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    when I step on your new white G-Units, what you gonna do?
    you won't do shit, because you ain't nothing but a fool
    the name is erase and I know how to produce the complex lyrical shit
    It's so complex that it makes every homie on the block look like a bitch
    here is my take on the gang violence of today in the ghettos
    these homies will shoot any punk who just comes up to say hello
    this is a bunch of bullshit, with all of this violence
    lets cut the shootings and murders and enjoy the silence
    I'm the greatest MC from the midwest, what you gonna do?
    I'm the whitest MC out there and I don't wear FUBU
    still I bust this flow and get the bitches in the club
    and when I feel like it I will buy a fat dub
    from my favorite drug dealer on the corner
    down in the south where the temps and the ladies are always warmer
    so what more can I say, I will be rich one day
    but that's not what keeps me rapping now it's time to lay
    down my finalee for all you haters you don't believe in me
    some people think that whiteys from the midwest don't deserve to be MC's
    well fuck the critics and there moms, yall never knew
    who I was and I do, peace out homies what you gonna do?
    Last edited by MCErase; 08-24-2005, 02:36 PM.
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    MC ERASE ------------------------------------- MC ERASE

  • #2
    I didn't really like it... mainly because the subject it jus sounded corny to me and talkin about a fat dub theirs enough of that.

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    • #3
      Way....Way...to simple...no Multis at all...No Similies...No Wordplay...lotz of steppin' up is needed....

      And I beg to differ that you are the Illest MC from the Mid~West....lol...Ever heard of Eminem???
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      • #4
        yeah I just started rappin' like six months ago... I got a lot of improvement and learning to do, but that's why I'm here practicing, ya know. So keep up the criticism it will only help me. Oh and yes I have heard of Eminem.
        MC ERASE ------------------------------------- MC ERASE
        www.myspace.com/mcerase
        MC ERASE ------------------------------------- MC ERASE

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