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  • Jadaafa vrs Axis

    5-8 barz
    3-0 Ko , 4-1 Tko or first to 5 votes
    no crew/hate votes, no dissing opponent
    48 hours deadline

    topic-girls
    You ain't got a truck that's hooked up with rims
    Kids'll see you like "damn, why I looked up to him?

  • #2
    im a misbegotten man thats been discarded,
    n bombarded wit pain n forgotten about n disregarded,
    its like cpid targetd n made it hard for me outta spite,
    caus i was happy for once n maybe doubtd his might
    n now my hearts cold n ive startd 2 fold,
    my soul ive sold bt my future only god beholds,
    so i sit at nite reminisn as im swallowd by the darkness,
    gods light disciplines me as im in hell followin the heartless,
    caus of some girl who brought my world crashin down,
    shes out on the street passin her ass around the town,
    treatn me lik a clown,so i loaded the clip n pulld ot the gauge
    plottn front page news,i was sick of feeln lik a fool on center stage,
    hell bent wit rage until i thought "thou shall not kill",
    1 of the commandments,damn it bt imma do it still,
    so i startd drivin wit premeditatd muder n my mind,
    bearly survn from depression bt new id hurt her in my own time,
    n got 2 her hous n went up n sneakd in the door,
    n creepd over the floor 2 her room(gun shots) screamn die u hoar,
    You ain't got a truck that's hooked up with rims
    Kids'll see you like "damn, why I looked up to him?

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    • #3
      good verse , Axis will have to work hard

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      • #4
        I'm never satisfying, only just a friend//
        I wanna blow you mind, what don't you comprehend//
        Cupid shoot me with his arrows, and they stay straight//
        From my heart you'll never vacate//
        Your my life elixer, but C's(cupid) arrows musta missed her//
        They pierce my heart so hard that this shit hurts//
        When you with others I'm always envious//
        But in the end I'll be the one you miss//
        You can't conteract or retract you spell on me//
        You stole my love and wont' give it back and thatz a felony//
        I'm hopin' to be the one who fell to one knee//
        You must see this would be the most glourious fantasy//

        VOTES MUST BE IN CATS OR THERE NOT ACCEPTED!!!
        Last edited by Axis; 08-25-2005, 07:35 AM.
        Download my new mixtape "Public Axis Vol. 1" http://www.sendspace.com/file/7527jn
        New Beats: www.soundclick.com/axisproductions
        Mixing/Mastering available! PM for details.

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        • #5
          C'mon quit sleepin' on this shit and vote....
          Download my new mixtape "Public Axis Vol. 1" http://www.sendspace.com/file/7527jn
          New Beats: www.soundclick.com/axisproductions
          Mixing/Mastering available! PM for details.

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          • #6
            I go wit jaadafa

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            • #7
              Votes must be in cats
              originality
              content
              multis
              flow
              vocab
              enjoyment

              yo peeps theres the cats u gotta vote in so radomen could u vote in these cats n then it will b countd

              peace n stop sleepin
              You ain't got a truck that's hooked up with rims
              Kids'll see you like "damn, why I looked up to him?

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              • #8
                Originality - Jadaafa
                Content - Probably Axis.
                Multis - Jadaafa
                Flow - I'm not quite sure. I guess I would say tie.
                Vocab - Same as above.
                Enjoyment - both

                Vote - Jadaafa
                P!

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                • #9
                  yo man thanks for the vote 1-0 to me uppin............
                  You ain't got a truck that's hooked up with rims
                  Kids'll see you like "damn, why I looked up to him?

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                  • #10
                    c'mon uppin......
                    You ain't got a truck that's hooked up with rims
                    Kids'll see you like "damn, why I looked up to him?

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                    • #11
                      originality -Jadaafa
                      content - Axis
                      multis- Jadaafa
                      flow - Axis
                      vocab - Jadaafa
                      enjoyment - Axis
                      Vote - Axis

                      I know, I know. This may seem like a weird vote, because jadaafa's my buddy and all, but I don't wanna seem like I'm dickriding.

                      Nah, JP, but on the real, jadaafa, you are slippin' man! I've seen you do way better. I figured that maybe Axis would just get knocked out in the first two lins, but man, you fell on this. I expect better next time, mister!
                      Love, live life, proceed, progress

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                      • #12
                        1-1 That makes me feel great ^^^^ lol...thnks...
                        Download my new mixtape "Public Axis Vol. 1" http://www.sendspace.com/file/7527jn
                        New Beats: www.soundclick.com/axisproductions
                        Mixing/Mastering available! PM for details.

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                        • #13
                          Originality - Jadaafa
                          Content - Jadaafa
                          Multis - Jadaafa
                          Flow - Axis
                          Vocab - Jadaafa
                          Enjoyment - Jadaafa

                          vote- Jadaafa

                          I don't know why but I was really feeling the kill her thing...no one really does that besides em and I was really feeling it, but I liked Axis's verse too. Good battle

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                          • #14
                            yo symptom dont worry i gotta a master piece on the way n its calld the lights gone,so be on the look out for that caus ive been uppin my vocab,playin wit my flow n tryna elevate n that piece i wrote in lik only an hour but no excuses,im sry master.lol n if u think im fallin of take a look at my collabs wit grandhustle19 n my new groups song calld soldier,i thought them spits were decent but awk well ill keep tryin

                            2-1 to me,uppin on this..................
                            You ain't got a truck that's hooked up with rims
                            Kids'll see you like "damn, why I looked up to him?

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                            • #15
                              uppin' 1-2
                              Download my new mixtape "Public Axis Vol. 1" http://www.sendspace.com/file/7527jn
                              New Beats: www.soundclick.com/axisproductions
                              Mixing/Mastering available! PM for details.

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