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    In the world Ive been forgotten, nuthin but misdirection
    N very one round be speculation creatin an opinion
    Everyone continually remains Judge~mental
    Ordering changes but I dont budge~alittle
    Souls goin commercial, but i doin that, hell
    I'd rather go to jail than be a dif personal
    It aint about music no its about~fuckin~clubs
    ridin on big dubs,2x plat fo yellin out~poppin~bub
    No its not about a connection to the fan
    No its about a connection to fuckin women
    I dont understand what happenin
    In the music industry the all wannabe~50
    If you like that dont mess wit me~simply
    Cuz then we will have a problem
    Shit make u look like tha row emblem
    So lets stop it now before it gets~any~worse
    Before this shits~a~curse

  • #2
    not good...keep trying you'll get better
    record for 2006:
    1-0-0

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    • #3
      what do u suggest i work on most yea this piece was forced a little because im workin on multi's

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      • #4
        Little Better Punches,try To Make Them Flow Better With Your Multies
        But Everything Pretty Good
        record for 2006:
        1-0-0

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        • #5
          some parts are blunt and just break the flow, the quick bars were okay...
          SECTION 8

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          • #6
            ok thx both of you and now im seein more where my flow breaks down

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            • #7
              Ok I don't want to seem retarded but can someone let me know what a multi is?? is it multiple rhymes in a line?
              MC ERASE ------------------------------------- MC ERASE
              www.myspace.com/mcerase
              MC ERASE ------------------------------------- MC ERASE

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              • #8
                yea like eehhhhhh im not good at explainin them n i dont wanna fuck u up so hopefully someone else will help you

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                • #9
                  uppin

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                  • #10
                    nice piece
                    othas already suggested what you can choose on workin on
                    like how you put it down though

                    peace

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                    • #11
                      thanks Grandhustle19 I tryed reppin ya but cant now i'll do it later tho

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                      • #12
                        i like props
                        Originally posted by Jay-z
                        The chain remains, the gang is intact
                        The name is mine, I'll take blame for that
                        The pressures on, but guess who ain't gon' crack?
                        *Ha Ha* Pardon me, I had to laugh at that

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                        • #13
                          i think multis are for exemple

                          blah blah blah blah ASS - KICKED
                          bla blah blah blah PASSED - IT

                          ur not retard, i didnt already know it since not too much time dud.

                          the spit was normal. not bad at all. the flow wasnt too good tho. keep it. n the multis, sometimes u dont gotta work the multis, just explain what u feel man. multis can fuck up a song

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                          • #14
                            alright thanks Rodamon n Encor3

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                            • #15
                              just keep it

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