HIP HOP LIFESTYLE

Announcement

Collapse
No announcement yet.

Me

Collapse
X
 
  • Filter
  • Time
  • Show
Clear All
new posts

  • Me

    Time to let them know who I am
    Psycho path raised by son of sam
    Motherfuckin killin these bitches infestin with snitchin
    Throwin'em undergound n never remeberin
    cuase thats what I was taught, thats the system I bought
    Integrity is all you got, if snitchin kill'em one shot
    Respect is my name, poor comin up in this game
    So I stay the same, never changin for fame
    Dad taught shoot to kill, so you know how I feel
    N it was nuthin~to~steal, so I crept to fuckin~doa~Deal
    As a Child I was called heartless, I didn't care regardless
    Put anotha one in they chest, did wrong they shoulda confess
    Ma undergowin all of this stress, it was for money nuthin more or less
    No TV harrass by everyone around me, kept my mind~cloudly
    Usually we had electricity n that could be that im~lucky
    Daddy got me pis so I lived life fuckin~reckless
    Jackin bitches for a neckless, punchin whoever is testin~this
    First came the drinkin then came the smokin
    Stealin became my token, fightin an option
    Cause poverty consumed my mind n body
    But now things gettin better, we got a little more cheddar
    But I always look back, cause I know I could lose this stack
    Still Im in a mode to attack, n I'll never change thats a fact

  • #2
    its aight 7.5/10
    yall done fucked up now endagered the industry better be prepared it's the return of conspiracy

    Comment


    • #3
      uppin for feed will rep

      Comment


      • #4
        Time to let them know who I am
        Psycho path raised by son of sam
        Motherfuckin killin these bitches infestin with snitchin
        Throwin'em undergound n never remeberin


        Doesnt Really rhyme.


        cuase thats what I was taught, thats the system I bought
        Integrity is all you got, if snitchin kill'em one shot
        Respect is my name, poor comin up in this game
        So I stay the same, never changin for fame


        I cant even count the number of times I have heard Name, Game, Same and Fame rhymed toghether.


        Dad taught shoot to kill, so you know how I feel
        N it was nuthin~to~steal, so I crept to fuckin~doa~Deal
        As a Child I was called heartless, I didn't care regardless
        Put anotha one in they chest, did wrong they shoulda confess
        Ma undergowin all of this stress, it was for money nuthin more or less


        Three bars rhyming will make people expect a 4th rhyming bar and when its not there it will sound disjointed.

        No TV harrass by everyone around me, kept my mind~cloudly
        Usually we had electricity n that could be that im~lucky


        Not a multi nor is it a very good rhyme. Remember to count your sylables when your trying to use multi's.

        Daddy got me pis so I lived life fuckin~reckless
        Jackin bitches for a neckless, punchin whoever is testin~this


        Not a multi nor is it a very good rhyme. Remember to count your sylables when your trying to use multi's.

        First came the drinkin then came the smokin
        Stealin became my token, fightin an option


        Doesnt really rhyme.

        Cause poverty consumed my mind n body
        But now things gettin better, we got a little more cheddar


        Single bar rhymes will make this sound disjointed if everything else is a rhyming couplet.

        But I always look back, cause I know I could lose this stack
        Still Im in a mode to attack, n I'll never change thats a fact

        Comment


        • #5
          alright thanks for the breakdown

          Comment

          Post ad widget 300x250

          Collapse

          LATEST POSTS

          Collapse

          Topics Statistics Last Post
          Started by Madeline, Today, 02:50 AM
          0 responses
          3 views
          0 likes
          Last Post Madeline  
          Started by WesleyDrake, Yesterday, 06:54 AM
          1 response
          7 views
          0 likes
          Last Post Bynarden  
          Started by kbuqmophudbh, Yesterday, 11:28 PM
          0 responses
          3 views
          0 likes
          Last Post kbuqmophudbh  
          Started by Deborahlanker, Yesterday, 10:00 AM
          0 responses
          2 views
          0 likes
          Last Post Deborahlanker  
          Started by Deborahlanker, Yesterday, 08:25 AM
          0 responses
          3 views
          0 likes
          Last Post Deborahlanker  
          Started by Dave Dirty, 02-02-2016, 02:29 AM
          5 responses
          123 views
          0 likes
          Last Post | K Y L E |  
          Started by Deborahlanker, 10-31-2020, 07:43 AM
          5 responses
          23 views
          0 likes
          Last Post Rapsodia  
          Started by ioddvrea, Yesterday, 04:50 AM
          0 responses
          3 views
          0 likes
          Last Post ioddvrea  
          Started by pdmhuqwdghko, Yesterday, 01:45 AM
          0 responses
          2 views
          0 likes
          Last Post pdmhuqwdghko  
          Started by FrankCobalt, 11-25-2020, 11:29 PM
          1 response
          4 views
          0 likes
          Last Post Doro
          by Doro
           
          Working...
          X