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  • Ac3 Vs RodamÓn --- Topic -- First Time I Did It...

    Okkk....

    Ill spit first...aight?

    First time it happened, was the darkest night I ever seen
    And I was involved in the most tragic athmosphere I ever been
    I threw the body tied with a rock, rollin down to the river with the knife
    And with the body sinkin, I knew he was sinkin with the rest of my life
    How happened this? When i became a monster with no escruples?
    I never been in troubles, but this job I got now is like a blood bubble
    It is inflating with the victims blood, until one day it will blow up
    And will splash the face of the guilty, all my remeroses will be thrown up
    But I gotta raise and feed my kids, cuz I dont waat them to be like me
    I dont wanna em to know what tastes the blood of this fucked life is
    So Imma wash my hands, call my boss to tell him I finished the work
    And Ill go with my family, cuz my kids need a father to stay wit him more

    is the first time I KILLED A MAN, of a professional killer

  • #2
    good verse rodamon

    Here is mine

    First time I did it

    His words caused mental mutilation and absorbed consternation
    Into my skull filled with wounds engraved by his mortifications
    That reached unreachable entity and agglutinated~greedy
    Similar to toxicity and envenomed my dilapidated~body
    And shit it caused fatal malfunction in my still~brain
    And shit it caused fatal malfunction in now my chill~vein
    Blood refused just to circulate , I was just filled with hate
    That scaled to throat and words were scuttling and it felt great
    I just abandon myself to momentary and now all mortification is history
    Daddy sorry If counteracted 2 hardly but I had to show that I’m man and manly

    Rules
    no hate/crew votes
    votes dont have to be in cats but if you have time put few cats
    3-0 KO , 4-1 Tko or first to 5 votes

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    • #3
      Do I Get Some Rep For This lol....

      Orig~AC3
      Flow~Rod....
      Content~AC3
      Vocab~AC3
      Enjoyment...Rod...easier to read lol...i have a small brain...
      Vote~AC3

      not bad by Rod though....And AC3 I know vocab is important but damn....there were a lot of words that didn't really make sense in there....sometimes...simple is better....plus it kinda throws off the flow of things...but thatz just me...
      Last edited by Axis; 08-26-2005, 06:57 AM.
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      • #4
        Hmmm.. tough one.

        I agree with Axis that Rod's was a lot easier to read and that AC3 didn't make much sense.

        So.. I'm gonna go with Rodamón..
        <--------- I got a Shady_Gangsta original.. yeah!

        (somebulls -=CCDF=- (somebulls

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        • #5
          Put It In Catz for them ^^^^
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          • #6
            ^^ Nah, I think they get the drift..
            <--------- I got a Shady_Gangsta original.. yeah!

            (somebulls -=CCDF=- (somebulls

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            • #7
              if u dont then the vote isnt counted n id vote but i cant,nice spits n if u analize his words they do make sense,nice spits both of us

              peace
              You ain't got a truck that's hooked up with rims
              Kids'll see you like "damn, why I looked up to him?

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              • #8
                aight dont wanna be a bitch so I will count that vote , its 1-1
                and shit my verse was really simple , tell me what part you didnt understand

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                • #9
                  Originally posted by AC3
                  Rules
                  no hate/crew votes
                  votes dont have to be in cats but if you have time put few cats
                  3-0 KO , 4-1 Tko or first to 5 votes
                  Dumbasses.. what does this say..?

                  I gotta lay down a vote and that's it.. fuck cats..
                  <--------- I got a Shady_Gangsta original.. yeah!

                  (somebulls -=CCDF=- (somebulls

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                  • #10
                    nice spit dowg. uppi nfor votes. thx for count it AC3

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                    • #11
                      well... what i said... better say plis vote wit categories jnixon or it wont count!!

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                      • #12
                        man shut up , you voted against me cuz your vocab is from kindergarten

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                        • #13
                          yo this fukin battle is annoyn me caus ppl r votin for ppl caus there rhymes r easier 2 read,wat the fuck is happin n they wonder why 50 cent n all r on top of the game,pssssh but nice spit from both of us,keep at it n ac3 pm me when were workin on a new idea for r crew

                          peace
                          You ain't got a truck that's hooked up with rims
                          Kids'll see you like "damn, why I looked up to him?

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                          • #14
                            Originality-AC3
                            Flow-Rod
                            Content-Rod
                            Multis-AC3
                            Vocab-AC3
                            Enjoyment-Rod
                            Vote-AC3

                            this was kinda hard for me. Both were pretty diffrent in all cats but were still pretty good. Rod content was a lil more heartfelt i guess. But in the end i think AC3 won cause his was just more advanced plus hus content, flow, and enjoyment wasnt that much worse than Rod

                            oh and sorry for this long paragraph lol.

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                            • #15
                              aight ok , you all need to know this is txt so its good to have a good vocab , if Im doing audio I would go easier with vocab

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