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    Aight please give me some good positive/negative feedback on this props!

    Iím starting a new life like kicking up a drug habit,
    All fact in it just wanting to get the mic and cause some damage,
    I want people to realise my sense of meaning, no fearing feelings,
    Enemies deepening friends jealous of the talent youíre dreaming,
    Itís all creeping up on you and you canít find anything for healing,
    Sleeping isnít an option Iím fainting and looking at the ceiling,
    Watching my life uncover peal slowly, dropping down,
    Stopping around listening to this sound and improving what Iím about,
    What have I done what have I achieved and dreamed?
    All this sleep got me perceiving what I donít really see,
    I see me becoming well known respected as a musician,
    Fuck competition I want to be someone who influences this generation,
    But I know it wonít all this fucking criticism, about this lyricist,
    Whoís known as a controversial individual when you hearing this,
    Experience things see life is once lived so make the most out of it,
    Clasp the chances the world is at your feet make it worth living Ėthink,
    I just canít help the way I express myself and come across,
    Iím a person hurt inside seemingly lost, finding the plots of this life,
    Wanting my body to drop itís like all the time my heart pounds but my hands deliver,
    They depict a picture, in which my brain can figure, Iím a sinner,
    Like everyone else my time is getting old and cold like the winter,
    Iím causing you to shiver because what I illustrate is something you will remember,
    You wonít forget about it or doubt it my faculty is something amazing,
    Words touch wisdom when written by me no one can mistake me,
    No one can replace me or make me but you can hate me and kill me,
    You can have your revenge but you know that the life taken is just an innocent death,
    ''One of the difficulties of the job is that we create 11 unemployed people and then, on Monday, we employee them again as if nothing has happened."

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    Uppin
    ''One of the difficulties of the job is that we create 11 unemployed people and then, on Monday, we employee them again as if nothing has happened."

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    • #3
      Feedback would be nice lol

      .....
      ''One of the difficulties of the job is that we create 11 unemployed people and then, on Monday, we employee them again as if nothing has happened."

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      • #4
        yo man nice shit,jus shortin ur lines so it flows better but it was a very heartfelt piece,nice shit keep it up n could u check out my battle wit axis,i would appreciate it man

        peace
        You ain't got a truck that's hooked up with rims
        Kids'll see you like "damn, why I looked up to him?

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        • #5
          Props uppin
          ''One of the difficulties of the job is that we create 11 unemployed people and then, on Monday, we employee them again as if nothing has happened."

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            ''One of the difficulties of the job is that we create 11 unemployed people and then, on Monday, we employee them again as if nothing has happened."

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