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    rules
    3-0 Ko , 4-1 Tko or first to 5 votes
    and new rule : 48 hours after verses are done , if we dont have winner, one with more votes is winne
    Votes dont have to be in cats but if you have time put few cats

    48 deadline for verses

    you didnt sent me any topics so I suggest we rap about DRUGS - about how you feel about them , about consequences
    Last edited by AC3; 08-28-2005, 09:27 AM.

  • #2
    here is my verse

    Abrasive streets promulgating song of poverty~so~paltry,
    It prowls in your brain and conduct you to reality~of~misery
    In which drug is only trajectory to realistic dimension
    But its trajectory to wrong comprehension of world and brain lesion
    So hard that your nerve system sustain overcharge
    But that’s a charge of letting your own life to discharge
    in future of death addict that concluded in police district
    Of defunct addicts, so ask yourself is it worthy to inflict
    Yourself a venomous “dosage of inanity” to prevent~insanity
    That could be easily caused by malevolent~ reality
    Our beloved society that regularly inject us dosage of infusion
    That has worse consequences than injecting dosage of drugs for illusion
    So, is it worthy, NO!!!!Fight for benefit and profit till you are absolved
    Of anguish of unsolved problem and happily getting old
    Last edited by AC3; 08-28-2005, 03:01 AM.

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    • #3
      To teach the moral substance of the drugs, and lovin'-you (lovin' the drugs)
      To the brain of the listeners, highness is not only drug-abuse
      The consequences vary, from time-to-time
      To teach the moral purpose of life, in line-to-line
      The drugs may cause you to go into hyper-active-mode
      Crammin' to stay out of site of regularity, like a sniper-passive-show (The movements a sniper shows)
      Meet Joe, a teen of the highly affective-drugs
      Gettin' peer pressured, for the respect-from-thugs
      To stay out of site, is his only-mission
      But after failing to do so, he can only phony-listen
      To what they have to say to be lonely-dismissin'
      Any conversation he might-come-to-enjoy
      But decides to light-one-for-the-boys
      To the feeling he feels, is a great-notion
      Of what it feels to have you in your fate-motion
      Of what faith-lotions, to the skin of your brain cells to fake-boastin' (The way you act)
      Unfornately, his young-heart couldn't take the stung-part
      Of this brain cells that only had sprung-hard
      To the aftermath of the holocaust, his heart-and-lungs
      Couldn't function properly, he died apart-from-love
      The feelin' you feel, isn't always the best part-of-drugs
      Love, live life, proceed, progress

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      • #4
        good verse symptom

        UPPIN for votes

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        • #5
          Uppin

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          • #6
            AC3 had a good verse but my vote will go to symptom nice battle.
            *3~DieMensionAl*

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            • #7
              Originality - AC3
              Flow - tie *both flowed pretty well in thier own way
              Content - Symptom *Can understand the story and message much more clearly
              Multis - Symptom
              Vocab - AC3 *had words i could barley understand first time i read it @[email protected]
              Enjoyment - Symptom *I enjoyed both alot. @[email protected] hate when its close like this for me
              Vote- Symptom

              both were real good but Symptom just seemed to have more multis witch pushed it into her favor.

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              • #8
                2-0 for Symptom , UPPIN

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                • #9
                  My vote goes to Symptom. AC3 you've elevated mass since the last time I've seen you good job.
                  7Digit
                  UNTOUCHABLE LYRICISTZ

                  You The Flyest Guy Walkin' That's Only Because I'm Seated

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                  • #10
                    Symptom is winner , thanks for votes.

                    And thanks Rick

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                    • #11
                      YAY! You have elevated AC3, I'm proud of you.
                      Love, live life, proceed, progress

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                      • #12
                        yeah I elevated but still not enough , I really need to use more multis

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