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    The society today consists of broken-English
    The way we speak no longer justifies the spoken-destinguish
    Between the croakin'-leakin' and the soakin'-speakin'
    In the knowledge of today's growing-capacity
    Of the English language and it's sewing-actively
    At the interprise of the glowing-lactically (Lacking glow)
    If only people like 50 Cent could pronounce-words-properly
    I wouldn't be lecturing English, no-anounce-heard-stoppin'-thee
    From the destroying the pronouciation of the slow-bounce-cockin'-glee
    In the pride we have to speak English, the poor-attitudes
    Distingushin' my words with persona even more-glad-at-feuds
    If only we could stop and think, before-we-speak
    Maybe we can sound dilligent the more-we-leak
    Information into the pours-of-weak, the define the galore-we-need
    Of the English language to be our sanctuary of knowledge
    I can already hear my English teacher callin'
    The more we learn, the more we smack-cards (Read)
    To speak clearly, on a more definate note, is it that-hard?

    This is dedicated to 50 Cent.
    Love, live life, proceed, progress

  • #2
    yo gurl i liked this piece,multis r hot but everyone criticisin 50 for havin a lispe is annoyin me caus he never wantd 2 b shot in the first place but besides that all the foundations r in this piece 2 make it great,ur vocabs gd,the flow seemd gd n multis were great,keep it up n why do the best pieces keep gettin slept on in this board,uppin on this

    peace
    You ain't got a truck that's hooked up with rims
    Kids'll see you like "damn, why I looked up to him?

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    • #3
      was ite ye but the same he said, this shit of 50, everyone mistakes talkin sometimes. is like one day u go late to a place n everybody durin yrs remind you 'u was lateee, u was latee' is a bullshit

      but the rap was good, good flow, keeep it up

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      • #4
        Originally posted by Rodamón
        was ite ye but the same he said, this shit of 50, everyone mistakes talkin sometimes. is like one day u go late to a place n everybody durin yrs remind you 'u was lateee, u was latee' is a bullshit

        but the rap was good, good flow, keeep it up
        i didnt understand that....

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        • #5
          Thanks, uppin'.
          Love, live life, proceed, progress

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          • #6
            Nice piece - 50's alright thgh

            liked your multi's n content, your talented for a chick that raps - straight up

            The society today consists of broken-English
            The way we speak no longer justifies the spoken-destinguish

            great bar for openin wit your specific title to this piece

            keep @ it

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            • #7
              nice shit
              FUCK YOU BITCH!!!! YEA YOU

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              • #8
                nice shit.... 9/10
                Didn't you know
                i was waiting on you
                Waiting on a dream
                that'll never come true
                Didn't you know
                i was waiting on you
                My face turnt to stone
                when i heard the news

                Kanye West-Bad News

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                • #9
                  YAY! Uppin'.
                  Love, live life, proceed, progress

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                  • #10
                    Nice flow and structure. Multis were on fire and your vocab is cookin.

                    Loved it

                    Peace
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                    Think about it.....

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                    • #11
                      umma be real, I'm not a smart person, and well that's why is didn't make that much sense to me. Vocab is too much above my lvl. So yea vocab is pretty good, as well as multi's. The first line was kinda nad though, bc the sllybles(spelling) didn't match up, and it just didn't sound right that way. Stay-up. Peace.
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                      • #12
                        Some parts don't make sense to me either, but from what I can interpret, it's a good piece, though I don't necessarily agree with everything you said. If you're talking about slang and ebonics fucking up the english language, then you need to know that shit has been around for centuries and has a role on the Hip Hop culture.

                        I already know "I ain't no joke" is supposed to be "I'm not a joke", but some people just want to say it the "cool" way and I don't mind if they already know how to use it the proper way. I'm pretty sure if people pay more attention to what they're saying, then most of them will realize what is the proper way.

                        Peace.
                        P!

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                        • #13
                          ^I supppose you're right. It was supposed to come out as a joke, like by me using the last line, like by using improper English, such as "Is it be hard" or somethin' like that, but I couldn't fit it, so I made it more serious.
                          Love, live life, proceed, progress

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