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    i laugh from joy
    when i get employed
    at grand and toy
    is this the real mcoy
    or just another decoy
    too bad ive got saddend pain
    and im almost insane
    like saddam hussein
    shooting me in my head
    and missing my rotten brain
    Last time I had a fight, I killed the guy cause of watching FIGHT VIDEOS. Get free FIGHT VIDEOS at Whytze's Fight Corner.

    www.Whytze.com

  • #2
    Be more creative, add multies and wordplay etc.

    peace
    S.D

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    • #3
      u need better vocab, more multies, wordplay and creativity.
      the lines could be longer to.......
      youll elevate soon, keep it up.

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      • #4
        *shakes head*,u needa work on multis,work on vocab,make lines longer,extend ue pieces 2 like 8 bars which or so,add wordplay n qork on similies n touch up ur flow n write sum shit thats meaningful but thats jus wat i think

        peace
        You ain't got a truck that's hooked up with rims
        Kids'll see you like "damn, why I looked up to him?

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