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  • WoUldn'T Be A CrImE!!! NEW SHIT----FEEDBACK = REP, PLIZ

    [Verse 1]
    You used to fuck around, tho I know you suck around
    but now ur ass is struck down, first round you knocked out
    Thought you was a tough guy, you cant even run away
    Well, just broken your two legs, now we are gonna play
    Im goin maim you, I want that yo family feel yo pain too
    While I connect a webcam, dont be bored, Ima entretain you
    First Ima break the middle finger, and now lets see how flips
    Now you dont flip it in my back bitch, yell it very loud-y
    Ahhh, you scream like a sissy, you dont even kno to scream
    I just set up this broken finger to make u know who wins
    Cam is connected, you family just sent me a fuckin e-mail
    It says ‘hey, why dont you kill him like a dog in a kennel’
    Dont be unpatient mom, Ima make him suffer for you
    Ima quit talkin and Ima broke some bones to dont bore you
    You try to hit me now, you try to get someones help
    Idiot dont you see everybody hate you, I see you want hell

    [Chorus X2]
    Rob you, wouldnt be a crimeee....
    Beat you, wouldnt be a crimeee....
    Shot you, wouldnt be a crimeee...
    Kill you, wouldnt be a crimeee....

    [Verse 2]
    The city even set a price for your head, betta protect ya neck
    And turn back all the time, before somebody attack ya back
    Dont you know last day yo doctor is arrested for try to cure you
    Yeah you know when, after in the street somebody shoot you
    And you’re then runnin to yo mother house, knocked the door
    She sees you and slam it on yo face, dont try she locked the door
    Cops catchin you, you lose equilibrium n get dropped to the floor
    They aim at you n shoot but dont hit you, you got shot by a whore
    This is so pitiful man, but you keep escapin with a hurted arm
    By the way an old sir hits you in the ass makin a jerk from it
    You keep runnin bleedin, you stink, is the sweat from yo armpit
    You dont know why people hate you but you dont give a fuck
    One of the reasons, your stupid, nobody hope from you to be smart
    If you dream to be intelligent, with this brain you rather be a dog
    You may think ‘what a disgrace, why people hate on me?’
    Hey man think more positive at least, they aint phoney

    [Chorus X2]
    Rob you, wouldnt be a crimeee....
    Beat you, wouldnt be a crimeee....
    Shot you, wouldnt be a crimeee...
    Kill you, wouldnt be a crimeee....

    [Verse 3]
    Man, real criminals are psychos, rapists, killers or canibals
    If I kill you I wouldnt be called ‘killer’ cuz you are an animal
    Well now the law dont let beat your dog or left him
    Fuck it, lets stab you in front the police station to see what happens
    NOTHING!! Ha ha, what did you think, Ill get arrested?
    You are guilty of this torture, your hate just get infested
    Hey is fucked up isnt it, this usless hate, why people do this to you?
    Same they asked when you act like a jackass, do we sue you?
    Get on my car, lets make little trip to the sea, do you like water?
    Hey chill out, dont think Im going to murder you like others
    Lets beat your ass, aint you gangsta, aint you a strong wolf?
    Ima take your fuckin balls and Ima play ping pong n golf!
    it may hurt a lot, how you’d fuck up people with yo gone balls?
    I just threw out your mobile, so dont wait for phone calls
    Damn, a police officer, I aint got time to conceal you now
    ‘Hey, whats that! Ima arrest you if you dont kill him now!’

    [Chorus X4]
    Rob you, wouldnt be a crimeee....
    Beat you, wouldnt be a crimeee....
    Shot you, wouldnt be a crimeee...
    Kill you, wouldnt be a crimeee....


    If ur ead at least say sum pliz. ill repu if i can

  • #2
    feed

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    • #3
      hey people feed

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      • #4
        HEY FUCK ALL YOU WHO READ IT N DONT POST NUTTIN. feedbak plis, i need feedback

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        • #5
          Originally posted by Rodamón
          HEY FUCK ALL YOU WHO READ IT N DONT POST NUTTIN. feedbak plis, i need feedback
          lol ^^

          well, i thought the flow was good....
          i could work on the vocab and the corus a bit more
          other then that, its pretty good.
          keep it up man.

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          • #6
            thx, the first feed...buaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa.... ´
            i got tears in my eyes?
            cuz im listenin to vanilla ice
            wat a bullshit lol. mo feed

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            • #7
              yo man its nice shit n reminds me of dmx for sum reason,u gotta start workin on multis 2 up ur game n elevate n expand ur vocab if u wanna get better but keep at it man

              peace
              You ain't got a truck that's hooked up with rims
              Kids'll see you like "damn, why I looked up to him?

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              • #8
                thx man. DMX?? no, but id like to have his voice. the vocab is my worst weakness. thx.

                uppin fo mo feed

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                • #9
                  fuck, feed pliz

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                  • #10
                    hey IF U READ IT LEAVE FEED MOTHERFUCKERRRRR
                    i kno is a bda way to ask for feed but say pliz is usless

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                    • #11
                      yo man could u check out my new shit calld diagnosis murder,its a long read but plz do n leave sum gd feed back

                      peace
                      You ain't got a truck that's hooked up with rims
                      Kids'll see you like "damn, why I looked up to him?

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                      • #12
                        ill do it wen i can man. feed

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                        • #13
                          yea man you know its good, nice flow, i like the content dude.
                          i only add what the others said broaden the vocab.
                          SECTION 8

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                          • #14
                            yeah Up Vocab , but overall its good
                            keep it up

                            and plz vote in my battle AC3 vs. SlimShady02

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                            • #15
                              Nice shit..
                              hell naw!

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