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    Work in progress.....verse 1 of 4

    [hook]
    Even police won't stop at red~lights
    You don't want to be caught alone at dead~nite
    No punches, only lead~fights
    People seem to think bloodsheds~all~rite

    It used to be the only thing I had known
    Detroit city my sanktion, my home
    A place where cops don't police~streets
    And the streets always defeat~the~weak
    The only jobs to do are hustlin' and left
    Couldn't wait until the day I left
    But for the years I was embeded in its poverty
    I vowed it would never devour me
    Murder still prevelent like its mandatory
    Wishin' we still the Mo-Town glory
    No wonder itz still called Amityville
    Cut It'll drive you to insantiy still

    Lookin' for feed, and yes I know itz short for a verse, I'm workin' on 2 more bars

  • #2
    yo man nice shit,jus start workin on mutlis n vocab caus ur flow seemd gd,jus keep at it n keep elevatin

    could u check out ym shit man calld the lights gone or armageddon

    peace
    You ain't got a truck that's hooked up with rims
    Kids'll see you like "damn, why I looked up to him?

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      • #4
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        • #5
          tight verse.. looking good so far. Would be heaps good with a better vocab.

          "The only jobs to do are hustlin' and left,
          Couldn't wait until the day I left."

          ^left and left or was the first line meant to be "theft" either way, interesting :]
          R.I.P Proof
          ......
          get higher, get higher i never retire
          there is only two states to be in.. NSW & Stoned

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