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    I'm West Indian dog, I got the Island in my veins/
    If a cat fucks around that cat's body's goin lame/
    Some dudes like to think that I can't spit for shit/
    (Bitch please) Anything I say is hot, even gibberish/
    You talk the kinda shit that get you clapped up quick/
    I got the kinda flow to bring a tear to Q-tip/
    I gives a fuck about the kind of gear you rockin you bitch/
    I KILL you ass on some philosophical shit/
    My name is Mc VINYL A.K.A Rock and Roll/
    Comparing you to me, is like a diamond to coal/
    Don't test me man, I'll end your career/
    and you better act quick cause the ending is near/
    DING DONG! Guess who it is? Me at your front door/
    Get ready to fall on your face, and tongue kiss the floor/
    So if ya'll cats got beef, come and bring ya whole fam/
    But remember, Never to FUCK with a west indian man
    I might ignore you're record, because it has no bottom,
    I get loose in the summer, winter, spring and autumn.
    It's Dre on the mic gettin physical,
    Doin the job, NWA is the lynch mob!

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    Not bad. Flow was alright. Need to up your vocab and make your rhymes more interesting . i.e. Add some multis and internals.

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