HIP HOP LIFESTYLE

Announcement

Collapse
No announcement yet.

2 verses plz rate

Collapse
X
 
  • Filter
  • Time
  • Show
Clear All
new posts

  • 2 verses plz rate

    i just need a 3rd verse but i cnt be botherd at mo rate out of 10

    let me introduce my self my name is mc em im a king ive got a crown
    i aint around for a beef but i wont back down
    i suppose that aint my choice in this game anything go's
    i aint gonna pretend that im a drug addict like the pros
    i maybe new to the rap game
    but ill shoot to fame
    this is a proper rap
    i aint affraid t fire a cap
    all ya'll are falling into my trap
    yo come over here and ull get a slap
    now ive been unfurlled
    im gonna make a name for my self in this small world





    now for my second ever verse
    looks like i dont need to curse
    to sell records, ive just got to thank our lord
    cant wait to get a mtv award
    all these years ive been stored
    but now im here im gonna set the place on fire
    rapping has always been my desire
    pac, jay and big are hu i admire
    if it want for them i would'nt be hear
    id probably be on the dole drinking loads of beer
    in the next verse ill step it up a gear
    Last edited by kaneban1; 09-01-2005, 03:17 AM.
    Join my forum. 1st five people to have 100 posts get to be a global moderator

    http://eminemand50cent.proboards57.com/index.cgi

  • #2
    good man, gt a good flow. how abt dis 4 a third verse?

    "next verse, im guna hit this shit up its crazy
    go nutz, im stuck
    cz this knight in shinin armour is shady
    tactically nuthin can faze me
    take a lyrical race, win then throw up im lazy
    runnin my mouth so fast, however the jab is quick
    to flash the clip in your face, cz i go lyrically sick
    sick n tired of showin girl the magic stick
    iiiii'll finish rappers so they neva create a sequel
    obliterate them with a fukin pin and a needle
    leave u fukers confused like derranged people
    such that u wuldnt kno whether ur blak or ur white
    like vin diesel
    ha ha ha"

    (used royce's inspiration 4 da last line)

    i kno i aint good, bt was bored thought i culd give sum help lolz
    leme kno wat u fink
    safe
    leave me ur username when u rep me, n ill rep u bak (all posts) safe1 - post in that thread

    Comment


    • #3
      aight , use multis , up vocab. But it was good , keep elevating

      Comment


      • #4
        ac3 u mean me or kaneban1?
        leave me ur username when u rep me, n ill rep u bak (all posts) safe1 - post in that thread

        Comment


        • #5
          both of us need switch topics n do sumthing meaningfull,then up on vocab,ad multis,use similies and metaphors n touch up ur vocab,keep writin though n ull soon elevate soon

          drop some feed on my shit

          peace
          You ain't got a truck that's hooked up with rims
          Kids'll see you like "damn, why I looked up to him?

          Comment


          • #6
            kool thanx jadaafa man
            leave me ur username when u rep me, n ill rep u bak (all posts) safe1 - post in that thread

            Comment

            Post ad widget 300x250

            Collapse

            LATEST POSTS

            Collapse

            Topics Statistics Last Post
            Started by ioddvrea, Today, 04:50 AM
            0 responses
            3 views
            0 likes
            Last Post ioddvrea  
            Started by pdmhuqwdghko, Today, 01:45 AM
            0 responses
            1 view
            0 likes
            Last Post pdmhuqwdghko  
            Started by Deborahlanker, 10-31-2020, 07:43 AM
            4 responses
            21 views
            0 likes
            Last Post Heridan
            by Heridan
             
            Started by FrankCobalt, Yesterday, 11:29 PM
            1 response
            3 views
            0 likes
            Last Post Doro
            by Doro
             
            Started by FrankCobalt, Yesterday, 11:27 PM
            1 response
            2 views
            0 likes
            Last Post Doro
            by Doro
             
            Started by FrankCobalt, Yesterday, 11:24 PM
            1 response
            5 views
            0 likes
            Last Post Doro
            by Doro
             
            Started by FrankCobalt, Yesterday, 11:33 PM
            0 responses
            1 view
            0 likes
            Last Post FrankCobalt  
            Started by FrankCobalt, Yesterday, 11:31 PM
            0 responses
            1 view
            0 likes
            Last Post FrankCobalt  
            Started by FrankCobalt, Yesterday, 10:47 PM
            0 responses
            1 view
            0 likes
            Last Post FrankCobalt  
            Started by FrankCobalt, Yesterday, 10:43 PM
            0 responses
            1 view
            0 likes
            Last Post FrankCobalt  
            Working...
            X