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  • Ambitionz az a Rhymer (2pac re-work)

    Yo yo, check out my rework of 'Pacs "ambitions as a rydah"
    I gotta be one of da biggest pac fans in the world and i had the idea for this track awhile ago but only just wrote it now.I only did the 1st verse too so if any one wants do the 2nd and 3rd feel free.
    Ive tried to keep to pacs flow as much as possible, but didnt want it to sound too much like his so i changed nearly all of the words. im sure you've all got All Eyes On Me (it sold 5mil for Gods sake!) so listen to the original and see if my shit fits it.


    I wont deny it im a straight rhymer
    Aint no-one can fuck with me,
    Got these haters bussing at me,
    But they cant dis-hearten AB*, (*my initials)

    (lets get rrrready to rruuumble)

    I wont deny it im a straight rhymer
    Aint no-one can fuck with me,
    Got these haters bussing at me,
    But they cant dis-hearten AB,

    My ambitions as a rhymer,
    My ambitions as a rhymer,


    So many broken down mics/
    plugged into the streetlights/
    My cru was mad tight, straight rhyming by moonlight/
    A seed born from a fiend/
    Feening for mad green,on weed at fourteen/
    Keep chasing the dream/
    To be a soulja, but couldnt keep my anger within/
    Yo it was crazy baby, everyday of my life was a sin/
    With my ambitions as a rhymer/
    Never wasted time on trick-hoes, i flyed by ya/
    Strictly spitted game to real, check my skill bitch/
    Alcohol sips with my chips, fetch me some dip bitch (haha)/
    I dropped bomb-ass rhymes, keep it real/
    Many people hated my skin, but i just chilled/
    From hustling to playing/
    To fools wanting my shit explained/
    I had no time for them bitches, i just tryed to maintain/
    Id write a rhyme - kick it/
    Hoping people'd see that im wicked/
    Competition didnt exist,cuz they wouldnt except my whiteness/
    I still rhymed though, cuz yo it was all i had/
    It was hard for a start i never liked my dad/
    Now hes gone and hes gone because i made him go/
    He was just a fag who left his family for a hoe/
    He's a confused dude who losed the respect from us/
    I planned and plotted my schemes and he'll wish he never left us/
    Cuz real pain remains with you every night/
    Shed so many tears it ruined my eyesight/
    They're my problems, and ill handle 'em when i fucking see him/
    Best wear a rubber, ill probably get off on it when i beat him/ (hahaha -yeah)
    I will creep up right behind ya/
    I kill ya with precision/
    But thanks for taking a listen, to my Ambitions as a Rhymer.



    What dya think yall???
    Let me know, and if anyone wants to add verse 2 n 3 (or rework any other pac song) id love to read em man.


    PEACE

    Illrun
    The only thing worse than the wretched pain in my mouth is the excrement spewing from yours-Stewie Griffen

    ONLY GOD CAN JUDGE ME

    R.I.P ~ Tupac Shakur-my biggest musical inspiration…you are missed everyday

  • #2
    uppin

    come on fellaz (n females)
    1 reply and im happy!

    PEACE
    The only thing worse than the wretched pain in my mouth is the excrement spewing from yours-Stewie Griffen

    ONLY GOD CAN JUDGE ME

    R.I.P ~ Tupac Shakur-my biggest musical inspiration…you are missed everyday

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    • #3
      heh

      yo i liked this shit. to tell you the truth i didnt really get into 2pac, i went from mase, biggie, canibus to em.. but yo the flow was tite and i enjoyed readin your shit

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      • #4
        Yo thanx for replying man i hate dead threads (especially when they're mine!)

        I cant beleive you not in to pac!!! R u crazy!!?
        Yo all i can say is listen to "me against the world"
        If it dont convert you than your beyond help (lol)

        Yo on the real though, thanx for reading my shit, 1 love playa


        PEACE
        The only thing worse than the wretched pain in my mouth is the excrement spewing from yours-Stewie Griffen

        ONLY GOD CAN JUDGE ME

        R.I.P ~ Tupac Shakur-my biggest musical inspiration…you are missed everyday

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