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    My rap features are distinctive they're unique,
    Like an essence of poetry,
    What I portray is emotionally deep,
    You can picture the scene,
    The image clearly visible even in dreams, asleep,
    The language is highly achieved,
    I'm the rhyming greatest emcee,
    With feelings so concieved,
    A fake to this masquerade society just like police,
    I release anger on the paper for you to hear and see,
    I never preach,
    Get my head in circles smoking trees,
    Eyes rolling back deep,
    As I look back at what my life has achieved,
    No one can be brighter than me,
    My verses accelerate with all my rage,
    Put onto the page, all the hate receiving lectures,
    Got turned on their face,
    As they can see what I can do with my lyrical campaign,
    A dangerous rampage,
    That can destruct anyone who takes my name in vain,
    ''One of the difficulties of the job is that we create 11 unemployed people and then, on Monday, we employee them again as if nothing has happened."

  • #2
    I didn't really catch the metric rhythm of this spit, but it's aight, I guess. A lil childish at the end, seemed like you wanted to rhyme anythin' togetha lol but hey carry on
    Peace
    Krit!cal
    This is not a war

    This is a motherfuckin' extermination

    THE HITMEN

    Piece - Krit!cal - Green Chronic - Derty Joey - Stonezz -DeNasty

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    • #3
      tight for a key dwg..few interesting lines in that N flow wasnt bad either. :]
      R.I.P Proof
      ......
      get higher, get higher i never retire
      there is only two states to be in.. NSW & Stoned

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