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  • Key Style (Hot Shit, Verbal Outreach Look In Here!)

    I write my mind onto paper to express my hate
    I try to say something that will cause a riot debate
    Coz i hate it when people dont say what the know
    Say what they think, freedom of speech for show
    Edit my lines, make the flow sound hard
    Leave you scared a wreck and scard
    I could write a full story but tell you how i feel
    Bust blood all over your face and make you squeel
    Beg for mercy try to make me stop
    The day i do that will be the day my lyrics flop
    Hit the floor and hear the tears drown
    The walls move in and i cant move around
    My voice box is dead and im waitin to pass
    I will rape your lyrics like them sick fuckers that sexually harass
    But i aint like that, have you ever heard me rhyme
    If you havent motherfucker its about the time
    You learn to read and say aloud my 'style
    An ima bite off the head of the government like a crocodile
    Verbal OutReach i should be in you crew
    Im like a leader i can tell you what the fuck to do
    It was my idea to get a forum for the topics
    And i aint in your crew but im one of the hot picks
    One of the best to breathe on this shit
    And i'll retire from the game the day i decide quit

    I dont mean that last bit to be agressive i just didnt want to ruin the flow
    Last edited by MC Fresh; 09-04-2005, 03:25 PM.
    OH HAI!

  • #2
    good flow. and good rhyme for a keestyle.
    ye, i think u shld be in verbal outreach, youll be a good member in that.
    keep it up man, peace.

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    • #3
      yo , gap2gap you are good , I need to consult with other members , so I'm not promissing anything.

      But it will be better if you start a new crew. So we will have more song writting crews. You are respected here and people would like to be in your crew. I think MC Konman would like to be in your crew. He is elevating (and he is leading in our topical battle , but next time MC Konman I will write with my full skills)

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      • #4
        ^^ ye, if gap2gap made a crew, id like to be in it...
        id also like to be in verbal outreach aswell ^^ but i admit i still need to elevate.

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        • #5
          ye i might start my own crew up but i aint never led a crew before, dya reckon i could do it? I'd prefer to be in a crew already to like get to be better and elevate more by your people, ya know what i mean
          OH HAI!

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          • #6
            yo man i feel ur truly a talented writer but not consistent enough,ur spits range,ones hot n brilliant n then u cum out sumthing that looks weak n then sumthing thats decent n then brilliant n gd again n ur verses dnt seem 2 hav multis of any sort n thats my only worry n peeps that want 2 u shoulds join the site vokab was tlkn about n then ull c how gd u really gotta be

            heres a link n if u join pm me

            http://www.hiphopemcees.com/forums/index.php?

            thats jus my 2 cents though if the rest of the crew want u in thats no problem of mine
            You ain't got a truck that's hooked up with rims
            Kids'll see you like "damn, why I looked up to him?

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            • #7
              i really want to be in your crew, thanks. then after a bit i could split and create my own i just wanna like get into it and yall could help me if ya know what i mean
              OH HAI!

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              • #8
                yo man go n work on a piece wit multis n higher vocab n then post it up caus there ur weak points n if u wanna c how gd other writers r join this site,

                http://www.hiphopemcees.com/forums/index.php?

                register n then pm me n post sum of ur shit up n check there shit out n ull c how much we needa elevate 2 be on there level n drop sum feed on my pieces on there

                peace
                You ain't got a truck that's hooked up with rims
                Kids'll see you like "damn, why I looked up to him?

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                • #9
                  alright man ima sign up on that now, so av i gotta show you how i can use multis to be in verbal outreach
                  OH HAI!

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                  • #10
                    yo im not sayin if u show me ur gd at multis that ur deffiatly in im jus sayin that if u improve on that n ur vocab then ull b in wit a better chance of ettin in n when u register post sum shit up n pm me

                    peace
                    You ain't got a truck that's hooked up with rims
                    Kids'll see you like "damn, why I looked up to him?

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                    • #11
                      ok man i get ya, i've signed up an now im writin somethin full of multis
                      OH HAI!

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                      • #12
                        yo n post sum ur shit there n ull c wat u gotta elevate on

                        peace
                        You ain't got a truck that's hooked up with rims
                        Kids'll see you like "damn, why I looked up to him?

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                        • #13
                          ok man, i just posted 9 hot Multi Filled Bars in the "It Was Written" Forum
                          OH HAI!

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                          • #14
                            That was good I liked n I think the last line is fine every writter I think should have a little bit of cockiness to him, but not over do it. Yea you could work on multi's. I also think it would be a good idea for you to start a crew cuz this forum needs to be spiced up some more. Could help activiy, but meh its your decision.

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                            • #15
                              Sup man nice spit - others already suggested some ideas you can consider though overall everybody who wants to - elevates
                              keen on checking out some more of your rhymez man

                              keep @ it

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