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    Wiv us, there is no fukin us,
    U control evry fukin fing that ever happens wiv us,
    Evry fukin fing I do seems 2 be a mothafukin mistake,
    I used 2 be happy but now my smiles r just fake,
    All I have in me is negativity,
    Cuz wen u near me, u burn all my positiveity,
    I used 2 be able 2 be my own man,
    But now u control evry fing I do, evry fing I cnt and evryfing I can,
    The only constructive fing in me,
    Is the strentgth 2 believe
    That I can do better,
    Cuz I int a regretter,
    So il turn my back on u,
    Like u did 2 me,
    And il 4get evryfing I knew
    And once again b free!

  • #2
    Horrible rhyme. The word is "thing," not "fink." I suggest you got back to second grade, and learn your grammar/spelling skills.

    As for the rap, horrible. No multis, vocab was very kindergartenerish, and the rhymes were just plain suckish.

    I suggest you either up your game, or quit.

    I hate quitters, so up your game.

    I used to be as bad as you, if not worse, and now look at me. Check out some of my newer rhymes, and you'll see.

    Don't give up!

    Your girl,
    Symptom.

    P.S. - My toe hurts.
    Love, live life, proceed, progress

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    • #3
      ^werd
      Originally posted by Realize
      evilspecialist has always been a god of poetry even before his join date of june 04

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