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    Yea im new to the site..but i aint new to this shit son,
    That means anyone of u lil rap artist can get some//
    My flow comes crashing down on lines u couldnt afford it,
    Cus my lyrics will make yo rhymes look like the flooded scene in new orleans//
    So fuck what u might heard..im wilding out on the whole state ,
    The my words will make an iceberg seem like a snowflake//
    So dont get pumped up by ya crew saying go get em u might beat em,
    With my raps u betta bring ya gang u might need em//
    you see that dude rawer than meat,
    somebody try an find another rapper rawer than me//

  • #2
    Work on your game. Add multis, although you had one in your first two lines, or your first bar. Up your vocab, and try to bring a meaning to your raps, although I understand this was just "quick freestyle." Try to add extratresstrial meaning to your raps, and you will get takin' far.

    Work on multis, vocab, wordplay, and similes, possibly meaning, definately meaning, you will be flawless.

    Fave line:

    The my words will make an iceberg seem like a snowflake//

    ^Good line. I expect to see more of this from you? I thought so. Lol.

    Keep at it, BigProblem, otherwise you will have a "big problem" if you don't. Because you won't be good at rap! Lolness.

    Your girl,
    Symptom.

    P.S - This rap gets a five out of ten, for lack of multis, meaning, and vocab. Flow was good though. My hands are sweaty. Plus you had a few good lines in there.
    Love, live life, proceed, progress

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    • #3
      symptom appreciate ya post and everything but this is a freestyle the whole point of freestyling is to just hold a flow now if this was a song then i would understand but its a freestyle baby get ya weight up

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