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    He enters the resturant, hunched over livin'-a-slant
    Asks to be appointed a table, but is only given-a-glance
    After waiting a few moments, the man applies-help
    Asking for a waitor to serve his declined-yelp
    Of the service he desperatly deserves-to-have
    Unfortunately, his situation was on the reverse-for-blacks
    The waitor's cold eyes stare back at the man's reflection
    Twitchin' among the man's seeminly dark complection
    The waitor without guard calmly tells the man-to-leave
    To follow his orders, and no one will stand-with-grief
    But this man wasn't going to follow-his-directions
    He'd die before he had to swallow-his-perfection
    Of what it was to be an individual of night-and-day
    Because he was only concerned with rights-and-ways
    Of the future for the cosideration of the Africans
    The waitor was staring boldly into his eyes, clearly askin'-him
    To leave before he had the police grabbin'-him
    But the man proudly stood his ground, pride was smackin'-him
    Using forceful tactics, wasn't in his-face
    Instead, he calmly told the man that he wasn't leavin' this-place
    To stand up for what you think, his only beliefe-in-morals
    Unfortunately for him, that wasn't the waitors reef-in-corals (Croal reef)

    But why does it have to be this way in the universe?
    Why can't we be equal, instead of randomly dispersed?
    What happen to content of character, where-did-that-go?
    Sure, love surrounds us, if that's true, cares-hid-fast,-though
    In the lies of everyone's eyes, I can see-it's-true
    We are bit down to social standards, rather than me-and-you
    Love, live life, proceed, progress

  • #2
    that was a good little story you got there i enjoyed readin it, pity it wasnt longer
    OH HAI!

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    • #3
      Scorching work for real. Excellent with the flow and multis and a real deep subject right now especially considering the racial tension after the hurricane last week. Kinda reminds me of the story of M.L King when he went into a restaurant and was refused service but refused to leave. Really great description, keep up the great work, your ideas are always fresh. Most consistently dope, innovative rapper here without a doubt!!!
      twitter.com/thisistc

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      • #4
        ^YAY! I'm feel so loved. Uppin'.
        Love, live life, proceed, progress

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        • #5
          Your flow is finally fixed now. I rapped this shit and it flowed very well (Even though I slipped up a few times) because all those multis helped a lot. Let's not forget to mention that you've improved a lot on the multis as well. I don't think they took anything away from the lyrics, which I like a lot, by the way. The content of the lyrics is very strong and the same goes for the storytelling.

          I am writing a song about racism right now too. Thanks for the idea.
          P!

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          • #6
            ^Lolness. I think I inspired gap2gap, also on that subject. What a trend setter I am. Uppin'.
            Love, live life, proceed, progress

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            • #7
              Nice...i just posted sumthin' last week with some racism shit in it.....itz a hott topic...you captured it nicely....unlike most people who just blame other people(KANYE WEST) you just put it in a story....nice work keep it up....
              9/10
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              • #8
                Uppin'.
                Love, live life, proceed, progress

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                • #9
                  Uppin'.
                  Love, live life, proceed, progress

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