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  • Who Wants War!

    Listen cats its the dark mayhem and i'n about to make a stand
    extending my reaches to my homies lending a deadly hand
    our force is wild we trample the creepers like a marching band
    my little clique is the most strongest
    the rest will perish while we stay victorious the longest
    we keep killing on point while the rest keep aiming a perlonged miss
    anytime we step in these deadly situations will arise
    so if you turn around and your home boy is missing don't be surprised
    he'll probably be in a ditch some where mutilized
    face down in his own blood sterillized
    we ingage in deadly close range kombat that will get you brutallized
    just licking brains out at close range no time to analize
    so if you are smart and plan to take sides you know which to pic be wise
    are just keep your fuckingt mouth shut and you'll live lonely
    cause we strike fast and swift like we war houngry
    you better pay attention with our trouble there's no boundary
    we combine multipal assults carfully like chemistry
    we would have the area looking like a battle cemetry
    I slice and divide nigguz metricly
    who ever else wants the trouble could get it hecticly
    when I get in action all you'll be seeing is steel and silver gadgits
    strong warriors hitting hard like marvel mavrics
    this war is about the survival of the fittest not the fools
    we'll terrorize which every city you from
    and curupt those triggerhappy kids you got locked in the schools
    leavine the reasidancy areas gory enough to make you drule
    and mark every inch of the victims with shots from the milli gage
    motherfuckers gotta keep on the low with antics we past that stage
    we got enough aurtillery to make a millionaires wage
    or filp the script and cut the crap and put your life on the last page
    I leave bustaz dumbfounded lyrically with excelence
    target any one we go hiding under speculance
    if i'm going to be the leader of a clique I gotta order and maintain
    get thinking and making the fear and my share of mainpain
    you malfountioned when I scattered shots through your mainframe
    I'm the big daddy retired the rest of your crew by raising the cain
    in this field ever one should know there's no time for play'n
    these dangerous acts would leave you on the ground laying
    let this be a lesson never put my name in your beef you'll get slay'n
    no need for you to cry bitches I was just saying
    i am like the devil dealing with some nightmareish aspects
    but in broad daylight we damage shit is a wide ordeal like mathtechs
    just law low under the radar and plot schemes
    you bitch nigguz sucking dick for money by the sceme by all means
    we heading straght for you dirty nigguz using the strategy direct attacks
    you dipshits stuck in the dirt ain't getting no respect in the hood
    you cats lost already rotted out like an old piece of mite infested wood
    anytime you bustaz see my clique you better vacate
    i'll smack you with the quicksilver and from the force leave you gaped
    your monkey ass would be recorded like a fucking historic ape
    you wanna war againts me or the crew? better rethink
    your head would be sliced tha fuck off at the sound of shink
    and I got the power to do it with the snap of my fingures
    cause in this game i'm the mostly feared warlink
    Lyrical Underground Assassin King

    XEXAK

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  • #2
    yo! where the feed itz!!!!(O)
    Lyrical Underground Assassin King

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    • #3
      to be honest I didnt read whole shit cauz after those 5-6 barz it gets monotonous , flow was a bit off
      I suggest you to change rhyme scheme cuz you need inners. Also you need good old multis.

      But it was good keep elevating

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      • #4
        was eh....
        Guys So Small...Look Mini Me Made a Mini Him...-Swann

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        • #5
          Originally posted by AC3
          to be honest I didnt read whole shit cauz after those 5-6 barz it gets monotonous , flow was a bit off
          I suggest you to change rhyme scheme cuz you need inners. Also you need good old multis.

          But it was good keep elevating
          yeah just the kind of feed I needed i know at time the flow is off but thats just miner to me cause I could change my flow to suit the type of message i'm trying to send as for this verse there where certain lines that are very (deadly I would say) so i spit those lines quick but i was mainly trying to tell a story and yeah I do have to waork on multis,this verse Is old anyway I could come with harded shit than this cause i go by "Killer Barz" this verse is soft compared to the shit that i am capable of spitting at this point in the stage i'm at now cause i use to take part in battles with some sick motherfuckers so that also healped but I see what you are saying dawg i'll keep that in mind
          Lyrical Underground Assassin King

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